with a frig on the way we have work to do today...
We have a frig
On the way
We have work
To do today
The old one
Needs outing
And cleaning
I'm shouting!
And what will
We find behind?
I might mind
If I see
A rodent there
I will scream
And run in scare
Oh why did we
Buy a new frig?
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Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 6, 2004
Lot of us say frig down here.
A mouse can make anyone jump?
Thanks for reading & giving your nice comments cuzz.
Have a happy Christmas!
Lurve ya!
Reviewed by Jenna Daniel (Reader)
Reviewed on November 8, 2004
I LOVE that frig is unclear, and HERE'S WHY.....IT WORKS the way you utilize it! As long as the context can carry the weight of your message you're OK, and in your case I think it does. This is a fun poem. The fridge (that's how it's spelled) anyway the fridge is not necessarily a crucial element in this case. I see the dread and hilarious regret as the main idea. Keep it coming.
lol......i know!!
new items bring ease and extra effort.. all in the preperation......but in the end......well........it beats chopping ice!!!
so evict your mice! lol
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A mouse can make anyone jump?
Thanks for reading & giving your nice comments cuzz.
Have a happy Christmas!
Lurve ya!
new items bring ease and extra effort.. all in the preperation......but in the end......well........it beats chopping ice!!!
so evict your mice! lol
cause the old one
needs outing
and cleaning :)
good luck--i'm stuck with one that rattles and rumbles LOL
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
cute write! enjoyed :)