I was called a hummingbird
'Cause I flit in and out
Being called a hummingbird
Is what I am about
The only problem with it
Is you can never land down
If my arms weren't so tired
I'd smile instead of frown
Love this!
Sweet - as you cast out your lovely peeps!
Watching humminbirds near our front window, is a blessing I look forward to!
so tiny and carefree
Ahhh.. I feel a poem comin' on
WArmly, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on March 24, 2007
Always on the move,...I hear you...Loved this Lynn, hugs, Panda :)
I love hummers...the bird, not the SUV (although those are nice, too). The birds are jeweled wonders on wings; I don't think I'd want to see a HUMMER fly! LOL :) Beautiful capture!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
I know our hummingbirds do fight
a lot over the sweet water.
Neat write Lynn cuzz..
x0x0x
I have seen a hummer (the bird, NOT the vehicle! LOL) land, more than once. I love this write; you capture the tiny hummer in all its splendid jewelled glory! Very well done, Lynn!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Come to think of it I have never seen a humming bird land. Cute write. Love the art.
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
I like this one from the hummingbirds point of view boy do they let those wings go.... We had a well at Grandmas with trumpet flowers and nectar for the hummingbirds they would come through out the day a wonderful sight to see. Thank you for the memory in this adorable poem.
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Sweet - as you cast out your lovely peeps!
Watching humminbirds near our front window, is a blessing I look forward to!
so tiny and carefree
Ahhh.. I feel a poem comin' on
WArmly, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
Be safe,
Karen
Beautiful, bountiful and sublime.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
I love hummers...the bird, not the SUV (although those are nice, too). The birds are jeweled wonders on wings; I don't think I'd want to see a HUMMER fly! LOL :) Beautiful capture!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
a lot over the sweet water.
Neat write Lynn cuzz..
x0x0x
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Peace,
josie
Loved it!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Love,
CJ
hugs, Laura