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Them Eyes
by Louisa A Dobbins → (All Poetry by Louisa A Dobbins)
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We are walking down the street. I am not aware of how others see my eyes. I learned later that they are pretty. I am an eleven year old country girl.

Mama! Why do you slap me like that?

Hold your head down girl and stop looking in that man's face.

You always facing somebody with them eyes. Them eyes gonna get you in trouble one of these days.

You just wait and see, and don't come running to me. I'm telling you now if you git big you will have to find some place else to live!

No more chaps will be raised in this house.

I wonder why mama keeps slapping me. I wonder what is wrong with my eyes. Why come I gotta get big and find someplace to live...

and what is a chap?

   

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 Reviews of "Them Eyes"
Reviewed by Delia Latham
Reviewed on November 25, 2006
Wonderful writing, Louisa! This one touched me on a very deep level. You're very good at painting mind pictures.

Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Reviewed on October 25, 2006
Ah the things we remember...some memories are more pleasant than others. A very insightful write Louisa. Blessings, Michelle

Reviewed by K. Mulroney
Reviewed on August 24, 2006
Yep, adults have a way a forgetting that children do not understand until taught, not branded. This was very good.

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2006
There are all types of parents, some over protective and they are the worst. Why ca't we take the middle of the road and be sensible. A touching poem.


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