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Commuters
by Zahala San Simone → (All Poetry by Zahala San Simone)
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Ever notice the diversity on the morning or evening commuter train?

Businessmen dressed in
Navy blue
Unemployed men
Flirting with you

Bible readers
Studying along
Chatting wives--
Cell phone’s song

Muddied boots
From day’s hard work
Boyfriend’s ranting
He’s a jerk

Restless children
Retrieved from care
The mother sighs
Returns a stare

Old lady ranting
Prices too high
Her companion sings
‘Uh huh, oh yes, right’

Miss Perfect is seated
In pristine grace
With earplugs on
Head bobbing in place

We reach a stop
There’s shuffle and noise
Seats change faces
Some exit in joy

The poet sits
With sly observe
And scribbles abrupt
Short, vivid words

To portray this scene
Through prism-ed eye
These disjointed images
Subtly combined

As one in her mind
An inspiring scene
Of commuter life
And the Daily routine

She considers inside
What it all means
A car full of workers
In a country so green?

One thing for certain
They’re joined at the hip
By life’s daily grind
And this commuter trip.

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 Reviews of "Commuters"
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on September 8, 2006
And you're a great poet, to sit and observe and write such complex life in such short lines. Perfect poem. Victor

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
Reviewed on September 8, 2006
Sounds like a scene I've seen before. You've painted it so vividly.


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