Gently unfolding..... (poem) by Karen Palumbo on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 25, 2009

this is absolutely stunning, so calming and serene, i love this one.

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on September 21, 2009

WHAT BEAUTIFUL WORDS OF INSPIRATION FLOWS FORTH SO 'GENTLY UNFOLDING'
PHRASES AND IMAGERY OF OUR REDEEMER'S LOVE, CARE AND RESTORATION...EVEN BEFORE WE APPROACH HIM, HE KNOWS JUST WHAT WE STAND IN NEED OF AND HE LIBERALLY GIVES IT TO US. PHRASES, IMAGERY AND RHYME ALL BLEND TOGETHER SMOOTHLY IN THIS FINE WORK. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Margaret Mullings

Reviewed on August 13, 2009

Karen there is such serenity in this poem! Powerful and profound and yes I love the picture it is Gently unfolding! I am blessed for visiting you today. Thank you for sharing and may the Lord always bless and sustain you!!!!

Love And Prayers
Always!!!

Reviewed by Melie Bacon

Reviewed on August 5, 2009

I've often burned the midnight oil writing verse into the wee hours of the night myself, so I can relate. Even tho you're on the path less chosen I venture that you're on the "write" path. Be well.

Melie Bacon

Reviewed by Carol Grace

Reviewed on July 28, 2009

Really nice poem with a music and a message that calms the soul.
Carol

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on July 28, 2009

Such a peaceful read. The power of prayer - is it strong enough to correct all the wrong in this world? I guess we can try. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on July 23, 2009

Excellent and wonderful poem.Take care.I am glad that I can always have time to read your works.

EDWIN

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on July 22, 2009

this poem you offer, almost a prayer in itself Karen -- soothing a weary soul, providing a guiding beacon of hope -- peace and love my dear friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on July 21, 2009

Soothing descriptive of a healing dream. Patrick

Reviewed by Goddess Love (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2009

reads like a prayer, nicely done

Reviewed by Roger Ochs

Reviewed on July 17, 2009

This unfolds like a flower with each petal/line a new delight.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on July 16, 2009

Yes, indeed. This is true rest and relaxation, Karen. And all things that pertain to recuperation, restoration and revitalisation. So much energy within the peace here. Thank you, Kate xx

Reviewed by Michael Jones

Reviewed on July 15, 2009

Karen this is magnificent and I bow and submit to the Lord our God!!! Thank You, Peace!

Reviewed by Susan Smith

Reviewed on July 14, 2009

A friend of mine earlier blogged with this quote -
�Stand at the crossroads and look;
ask for the ancient paths,
ask where the good way is, and walk in it,
and you will find rest for your souls.�
~ Jeremiah 6:16
I sense you caught the essence of that this poem reflecting before you went off to sleep.
Always enjoy your posts,
Susan
Susan

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 14, 2009

Such a wonderfully uplifting spiritual that glows with your faith and conviction.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on July 14, 2009

Karen,
A beautiful poem.
John

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on July 14, 2009

Truly Unsure Of That Road You All Humanity Does Travel...

Your Friend,TRASK...

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 14, 2009

Wonderful write and piccy, Karen; well penned/imaged! Hope this finds you, Robert, and the "kids" well!

(((HUGS))) and much love from Burleson,

As always, your friend, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Lloyd Lofthouse

Reviewed on July 14, 2009

I've been in some of those late night moments where creation folds around you and holds you in the palm of a peacful, tranquil hand. the silence of nature, God's creation - trees - a breeze - the sound of water - a meadow - in the mountains - by the ocean -

Sometimes, we forget that we are only one element of that creation.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 14, 2009

great poem & photo ...

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 14, 2009

Beautifully penned wisdom in these unfolding lines - well done, Karen.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)

Reviewed on July 14, 2009

Such truths in every single line Karen...oh that we would learn from our mistakes and bow our heads and pray because truly, it's time. (Hugs) Holly

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on July 14, 2009

Excellent. If you feel far from God, guess who moved? Right on. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Ray { The Great Canadian Buzzard }

Reviewed on July 14, 2009

Wonderful / peaceful poem
Theres nothing like the quiet times
I enjoyed this very much
Have a Great day
The Buzzard

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on July 14, 2009

A tender soul, giving and receiving in thankfulness and the peace that comes with all and the fulfillment of life, great sweet poem and picture too Karen. Hugs! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle

Reviewed on July 14, 2009

Oh Karen, This has GOT to be my favorite!The way you develop the scene and bring the reader right in the scene with you. The faith and spiriutality you have is so beautiful. Thank you.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on July 14, 2009

Karen, Tranquility flows in the waves you paint. This is beautiful!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 14, 2009

Stillness abounds, a peacefulness

A lovely time of day, if we only know how to savor it, like you do.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on July 14, 2009

Nothing is more peaceful than, at the end of the day when resting one's head on the pillow, feeling the lover's head resting on our shoulder's crook letting go a soft sigh of contentment.

Georg

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on July 14, 2009

This is a beautiful write, Karen. Absolutely wonderful, my friend. God bless.

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on July 14, 2009

Your faith is always an inspiration. Thank you.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 13, 2009

Splendid poem and photo!...ET

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on July 13, 2009

good one Karen, very well rhymed and timed, cheers