I love this poem. I had the first line of it rolling around in my head for about a week or two and just googled it and came to this poem, love it, it's beautiful.
It seems rare that I find another author who has that lovely introspective quality about their work that you so beautifully expose here. The ability to paint into the inner core of the mind and illicit the reader to think and ponder is, indeed, a lovely talent to claim.
I hope you continue to develop it well, and to paint pictures in thought with questing, seeking, and pondering. We will all benefit and grow from such.
Stephanie S. Sawyer
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Reviewed on November 30, 2008
You have written words, outside of the box. Your concept is one of imagination.
Intuitively, I know I've lived many lifetimes, and none more interesting than the one I'm living now. However, being born an old soul somehow did not excuse me from the same job I share with you and that is learning to craft a positive attitude about
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I hope you continue to develop it well, and to paint pictures in thought with questing, seeking, and pondering. We will all benefit and grow from such.
Stephanie S. Sawyer
A profound truth in a superb write, Kathy.
Technically, very nice meter and cadence, as well.
Richard
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