On The Pier (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on March 16, 2006

I like the poem and the pic. I miss San Fran.

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on March 16, 2006

Just send over the tickets, we'll be right there! Great write,
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 16, 2006

Aha nicely done...just need a ticket to get there!!

Thanks for sharing sis!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on March 16, 2006

I hope you didn't leave your heart in San Francisco, Eileen...:)
I'm with Dawn on this creative and eye catching write
" no ointment
for disappointment "...very perceptive, and yeh get it copyrighted right away !!!
Beautiful pic of Frisco !
Peter

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)

Reviewed on March 16, 2006

Yep, I miss kinda that Santa Monica at times..It had a magic all it's own..Wonderful and brilliant from that pen, Eileen..

love joanne

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on March 16, 2006

Makes me homesick for the shores of California, its been a couple of years since my last visit, love the poem Eileen
love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on March 16, 2006

My, my, my....what wonderful advice, Eileen.
Makes me want to plan my 1st trip to that part of the country.

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on March 16, 2006

Oh it's been a long time. About 35 years to be exact. Had wonderful times there. Oh those Sausilito summer nights...Your advice is sound, Eileen. We renew ourselves in nature. Enjoy!

Lin

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on March 16, 2006

Sounds like things might be looking up for you, Eileen. I really hope so. This is a beautiful expression of loss and renewal.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on March 16, 2006

Eileen,

Very beautiful but confining picture.(lol) Excellent message here.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 16, 2006

I happily travel to San Francisco to play with gulls and sea lions, quite frequently, even when I'm not bummed out or disappointed - it's a magnificent place to play - but far too expensive a place to live!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on March 16, 2006

I can understand the "getting back in touch" theory, but I'll pass on going to San Fran to get it. Actually I had some very nice times in that city many, many years ago, but today? Naw.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 16, 2006

Excellent writing and photograph of Alcatraz; very well done, Eileen! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on March 15, 2006

California does have its mystical charms.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 15, 2006

Loved these lonesome pier and sea wrires
and you do them so well
I was in San Francisco once resided
in the middle of your glorious Bay
"Alcatrz", where I was a bad Boy broke a few hearts
Or was that a few heads....LOL
I really enjoyed your write
just injecting a litte humor there
Hope you don't mind

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 15, 2006

Eileen,

A joyous renewal of spirit...the beach is a healer. :) Isn't our Creator glorious! He knows what will soothe the tormented mind. Thank you...you've been in prayer today.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on March 15, 2006

Hey can I go to Sea Isle instead and play with Rufuz while he chases the seagulls...it is so much closer...?Ed & Rufuz (w00f)

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on March 15, 2006

I call it insurance eT. When we think life sucks...go to a place where inspiration and dreams keep you caught up in life. It's renewal...like this great poem.
Susan

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on March 15, 2006

I used to spend most weekends on the Warf in Monterey, Ca. feeding the sea lions. The pelicans were kind of scary though, they would swoop down on you and steal your food or the food Ihad for the sea lions and gulls. FYI Pelicans are really big, strong birds...smart too, they knew calimari from french fries...LOL and bagged mine more than a couple of times. A change of scene is often a good tonic for disappointment and broken dreams. I hope you are well.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on March 15, 2006

< <no ointment
for disappointment>>
can't you make some money with that one -- a Hollywood classic commercial, maybe? you look content, at least in the moment, on that pier. my heart's in San Fran with you for the moment, Dawn