My mind skipped over the stones
Watching the waterfall as the glint of sun
Made white caps shine like fractured diamonds
And my mind became like a kalediscope
Seeing in facets that split into rays of sunlight
Which merged with the falls and followed
The wondrous water in profusion and effusions
Of scintillation, played magic with my emotions
As I lifted my mind to the power that pushed
The water into such cascading effulgence
I stood in awe of a Creator whose imagination
Makes me yearn to see His heavenly creation
etw~2003
beautiful Eileen...
John
God bless you. Kathy
Seeing in facets that split into rays of sunlight
Which merged with the falls and followed
The wondrous water in profusion and effusions
Beautiful picture and visuals
Brilliant and inspiring!!
Peace Love and Light...and hugessss too...Morning Star
Just a "tributary thought" from your poem...michael
I love your poem, I especially love "Made white caps shine like fractured diamonds, such a visually stimulating line.
Lovely poem my friend..
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Stunning! I think this is one of my absolute favorites of yours...
Cryssa
Georg
Makes me yearn to see His heavenly creation
I stand in awe nearly every day looking at His earthly creations; it's hard to even imagine what His heavenly ones must be like.
Blessings and Love ~~ Micke
Be always safe,
Karen
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Blessings,
Joyce B.
"scintillation", "fractured diamonds", "cascading effulgence"
create sparkling imagery.
Axilea
lovely piece of soul-inspired creation herein, eileen!
peace and blessings,
carolyn
Love,Christine
All we have to do is look around at the Creator's gifts to us - His creations are majestic and wonderful to behold! I, too, love waterfalls - and His skies (unless they're filled with thunder and lightning - again, there is a terrible beauty to it, though) - His trees - flowers - sigggghhhhhh. This is a beautiful write. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.