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A Cascade of Dancing Waters
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My mind skipped over the stones

Watching  the  waterfall as the glint of  sun

Made white caps shine like fractured diamonds

And my mind became like a kalediscope

Seeing in facets that split into rays of sunlight

Which merged with the falls and followed

The wondrous water in  profusion and effusions

Of scintillation, played  magic with my emotions

As I lifted my mind to the power that pushed

The water into such cascading effulgence

I stood in awe of a  Creator whose imagination

Makes me yearn to see His heavenly creation

etw~2003


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 Reviews of "A Cascade of Dancing Waters"
Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on May 22, 2008
...all the beauty of water...you pen with emotion...as water falls...one is lifed to something higher...in this excellent write.
beautiful Eileen...
John

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on May 21, 2008
Beautiful writing friend~`*

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on May 21, 2008
Mesmerizing!!! It's the only word that comes to mind to describe this incredible poem. As usual, you write to my heart. Thank you.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on May 21, 2008
Eileen I love love this magical words
Seeing in facets that split into rays of sunlight

Which merged with the falls and followed

The wondrous water in profusion and effusions
Beautiful picture and visuals
Brilliant and inspiring!!
Peace Love and Light...and hugessss too...Morning Star

Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on May 21, 2008
Beautiful poem celebrating Meditation on Water - I often used to like meditating on the ocean waves coming in on a sunlit afternoon or evening and it works... BUT We of Earth are the Stewards of these precious water resources (not Creator) and having just come in from my Lake yesterday I can say we are not doing His Will on being the best stewards we could be right now. Shame, because despite those "Eternal Waters" we still need to protect the life giving physical water too!
Just a "tributary thought" from your poem...michael

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on May 21, 2008
ET,
I love your poem, I especially love "Made white caps shine like fractured diamonds, such a visually stimulating line.
Lovely poem my friend..
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on May 21, 2008
This is beautiful! I love the cascading thoughts, yet the thoughts that lead back to the source of the waterfall...that Eternal source...of the Living Water...

Stunning! I think this is one of my absolute favorites of yours...
Cryssa

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on May 21, 2008
Dip your fingers there, because in every drop is a kiss from their Creator.

Georg

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on May 21, 2008
mmmmm me too, invigoraging write here Eileen, good to read you again. Hugz Ch'erie

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 21, 2008
I stood in awe of a Creator whose imagination
Makes me yearn to see His heavenly creation

I stand in awe nearly every day looking at His earthly creations; it's hard to even imagine what His heavenly ones must be like.


Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on May 20, 2008
Beautiful poetry...these line,"I stood in awe of a Creator whose imagination Makes me yearn to see His heavenly creation,"...my favorite.


Reviewed on May 20, 2008
And a beautiful creation it is, your song of words cascades along with it> Hugs! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed on May 20, 2008
What a soothing vision you've created, Eileen! Even more beautiful than the picutre, your words are. I'll be visualizing this as I go to sleep tonight...
Blessings and Love ~~ Micke

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on May 20, 2008
Oh what a beautiful waterfall! Through the rippling water such beautiful creations are born through God's hands....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on May 20, 2008
Beautiful writing, Eileen; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on May 20, 2008
An outstanding write my friend, flowed beautifully, a cascading serene write, inspiring indeed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on May 20, 2008
You used some very lovely words that fit the contest.
"scintillation", "fractured diamonds", "cascading effulgence"
create sparkling imagery.

Axilea

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on May 20, 2008
a heavenly creation it is! nature's bounty in all its captivating forms is a wonder to behold.
lovely piece of soul-inspired creation herein, eileen!
peace and blessings,
carolyn

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on May 20, 2008
Such peace to this,, just lovely Eileen!
Love,Christine

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 20, 2008
beautiful, visual write!

Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz
Reviewed on May 20, 2008
A beautiful discription, the mere mention on waterfalls cascading just relaxes my mind. I too yearn to see the heavenly masterpiece.

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on May 20, 2008
Wonderful and free flowing, a joy to read. I also look forward to heaven.

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2008
Such a beautiful inspiring poem, Eileen ... I'm just soaking this one up ... hugs - T

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on May 20, 2008
If you think this is good he has so much more than we can imagine in store for us when we make it to heaven.

Reviewed on May 20, 2008
Eileen,

All we have to do is look around at the Creator's gifts to us - His creations are majestic and wonderful to behold! I, too, love waterfalls - and His skies (unless they're filled with thunder and lightning - again, there is a terrible beauty to it, though) - His trees - flowers - sigggghhhhhh. This is a beautiful write. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on May 20, 2008
How beautiful and inspiring, terrific and imaginative write. Love, Bonnie


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