Fantasy During A Wild Storm (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 8, 2008

Sounds like someone is getting hot tonight..Let the thunder roll on..
Great work...
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed on August 7, 2008

sexy stormy --wow!

Reviewed on August 7, 2008

Thunderstorms always sounds to me like the gods in the skies are trampling on top of mount Olympus for some real or imaginary grievance provoked by my words, but being mortal they can't do nothing about, so they cry in frustration, some times for forty days and forty nights forgetting that I have a boat and can swim.

Georg

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on August 7, 2008

...great write Eileen...strikes a chord in a creative way...belonging to you...and so wonderfully shared with us.
flashing passion is good...
John

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on August 7, 2008

Eileen, this is so lovely...and the last lines make it even more so!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 7, 2008

Lavish lightning licks our lips - Wow, you are a Wild Thing!

Reviewed by Shedding Light

Reviewed on August 6, 2008

Very romantic !!

Harold M. Nash

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on August 6, 2008

Good write ET. Well said and I love the music. One thing tho......it's spelled L I G H T N I N G.
Just thought you should know my friend. God bless.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on August 6, 2008

If i were in bed with you, you couldn't fit in your bed, and that is where I would be if a thunderstorm near us struck...Rufuz

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on August 6, 2008

Morning Sunbeams would top it off perfectly,,, Well Done!

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on August 6, 2008

Another great write Eileen, thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Todd-Michael St. Pierre (Reader)

Reviewed on August 6, 2008

Vey picturesque poem ETW! Felt like I was there... Nice work!

Reviewed by Linda Law

Reviewed on August 6, 2008

Eileen... amazing what we can feel and see between the lines sometimes in the writings of others and ourselves... When I write I don't always write about "my" feelings, then someone comments and I realize that I did! This is really good. The photo is amazing...and I know Karla will love it too.. Monsoon huh? We get them here in AZ alot...like yesterday... where are you? lindalaw

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 6, 2008

Wow, Eileen, I am undone, melted to the floor from the intensity of this write. Well done! You Wild Thing!! LOL And that pic - ohhhhhhhhhhh beautiful.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

You KNOW the StormSpinner loves this - and you!! =]

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 6, 2008

Wow!! Electrifying! LOL

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on August 6, 2008

Only you could inject a sensual arousal in a storm that would scare many.

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on August 6, 2008

Me thinks you should write one of those enthralling symphonies, with thunder and lightening and armore etc, and bring everything together in a crescendo in music, like you do in poetry, going by that picture though I would most likely hide under the covers ha!
Hugs! Jasmin Horst