I sat silently in the softly soniferous rain
partialy protected by a bus kiosk
I wasn't waiting for a bus,just walking, and
decided to stop and observe for a while
It is a lovely area outside a park,filled with
lovely wildflowers,and birds chattering
A large Oak tree allows visits by butterflies
hummingbirds,etc keeping them mostly dry
The spring rain is warm in the 77% temp we
have here ,in california
I'm always surprised by this kind of steady rain
like a faucet turned low never wavering
The ambience is gentle, like in a half sleep and
everything is misty including ones thoughts
In fact I began to have visions as if dreaming
yet I was sure I was awake
I don't know how long I sat there in total cozy
contentment,I didn't want to know
How wondrous it is to lose oneself and be truly
unburdened, I must do it more often...
etw-2009
Sheila
My favorite stanzas...the last one and the one about the faucet.
Well done!
Cryssa
Beautiful whispering words and pic also.
Happy Easter,
Christine
And you capture the moment(s) so well. -gene.
what's around us and see the positive.
Great pen, Eileen!
Eileen, this is very visual walk in the rain.
Cheers,
Dan
Carole~
Blessings and Love - Micke
Beautiful and peaceful imagery in thie write. I could feel the magic of the picture you painted with your words.
Blessings and love,
~Linda
"The ambience is gentle, like in a half sleep and
everything is misty including ones thoughts..."
You remind us that the magic is always there waiting to be discovered, experienced, appreciated. It is a form of sustenance for the spirit and you've captured it in a way that's simple and beautiful.
Georg
With Love,
Cindy
Love n hugszz Ch'erie
I'm with you. Letting the mind drift is rejuvenating to the body, mind and soul. Cheers and happy Easter. Liz
Be always safe,
Karen
(((HUGS))) and love, and God bless you this Easter Season and always, Karla.
In Spirit,
Bear
Happy Easter to you and yours; may it be full of love, hope, laughter, and above all, joy!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D