turn me off (a rant) (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 9, 2004

wow, so many frusteration wrapped up very neatly in this write. very well done!

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on April 7, 2004

Wow Karla, we were just discussing the affect of t.v on the toddlers of today in creative writing, this brought the point across full force...
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on April 7, 2004

Karla, just a flick of a switch and you are off, but the problem still remains, keep the protest fires burning...excellent write, Peac is the only Way, Ed & rufuz

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on April 7, 2004

Use the to key to turn it off............then look outside and the truth will have you smiling :-)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 7, 2004

Click the mute button!!

and listen to a CD!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 7, 2004

Brava!Brava!Brava!Shut the damn naysayers off.
The media is worse than the terrorists any day!
They spread lies and their own agenda, swaying
minds that can't think for themselves.Great write
Karla! We need more of it!

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on April 7, 2004

Well spoke rant, hope you feel better now!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on April 7, 2004

So much rant and so much truth turn you off heavens sake no....

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on April 7, 2004

I think we all need to rant every now and then. Good one.

Reviewed by Helga Ross

Reviewed on April 7, 2004

Can't blame you for the rant, Karla.
There's lots to be purturbed about.
And you're right, you took the words out of my mouth:
God would never say that.
God - yours, mine, no one's, no how, would ever say that.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on April 7, 2004

Karla...I am getting tired of it too...
all we could do is trust God to handle it...
Because we can't....there will always be sick
people in this world...and murderers..and well..
the govt..that's another story isn't it?...I
try real hard to look at the bright side...
it's not always easy...good rant....floria

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 7, 2004

(((Karla)))

NOW you know why I HATE to watch the news. TOO depressing! I'd much rather write or do SOMETHING than to hear or see of the killings on the tv! Great rant! (Did you write this with ME in mind?? NOW you know how I feel!)

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)

Reviewed on April 7, 2004

Well done Karla, keep on ranting. My mind is awhirl with this nonesense which is indeed grotesque as we momentarily boggled look mostly at old movies because this reality is hideous. Peace and blessings.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on April 7, 2004

Use that remote, Baby, then go out and enjoy a walk in God's beautiful Spring Creation, and life won't seem so bad after all.