Suicide Watch (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 21, 2004

(((Karla)))

I am glad this is only fiction! I have almost been to that point myself, and it is a place I don't ever want to visit again!

Powerful, hardhitting, and excellent write; well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >tears <

Reviewed by john zimmerman

Reviewed on July 21, 2004

powerful, evocative, and convincing

good write

john+

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on July 21, 2004

An excellent and very convincing write, Karla. Outstanding work, Poet.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 20, 2004

Frightning piece Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on July 20, 2004

(((Karla)))

Powerful write, I was worried when I read the title glad you are okay
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on July 20, 2004

A great piece Karla that brooks a frightening and disturbing subject .
We must always try and remain strong and optimistic in the face of adversity .

Hugz

Peter Paton

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on July 20, 2004

Karla...great to hear you are ok...great poem...very deep, very powerful verse...Fletcher B

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 20, 2004

I am happy that you are well. This is very powerful because so many feel this way and, unfortunately, some are not strong enough. This poem of yours matches exactly to the last one that I posted. Merci mon amie. Amour et paix. R�gis

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on July 20, 2004

Karla,

A superb piece ... bravo! Glad that you're alright!

Your friend,

Robert

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell

Reviewed on July 20, 2004

Wow, I am beginning to wonder what is in the water lately??? This is a great piece and I am relieved to hear that you are OK, please stay OK, OK? ;) It is kinda weird though the 'theme' that seems to be going around as of late. Well written Karla!

Love & Hugs, your Tx neighbor, JC xoxoxo

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on July 20, 2004

A truly unique and convincing write, Karla.

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on July 20, 2004

The poem, "Suicide Watch" is an outstanding composition. I did enjoy the rhythm and the artistic contents.

I salute You Sublime Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on July 20, 2004

i know you are stronger than any moment of self doubt. the poem is good though heart wrenching...never give in to that moment