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Suicide Watch
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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I AM OKAY. I promise! Just another write that came to me--


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Life jerks the rug out from under my feet,
I slam to the floor, lay in liquid heat,
I burn, how it burns!  I cry out in pain,
I wish for the rain, I wish for the rain!

Life covers me in a shroud of blindness,
Where I am, there is no hint of kindness,
It's so dark, it's so dark!  I cannot see,
I wish to be free, I wish to be free!

Life pins my hands and arms down to my side,
I am forced to go along for the ride,
Let me go, let me go!  This isn't peace,
I wish for release, I wish for release!

Life kills my body again and again,
I.  Feel.  EVERYTHING.  I pray for the end,
The tears, o, the tears no one hears me cry,
I just want to die, I just want to die!

(C) Copy written, July 20, 2004, by Karla Dorman.


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 Reviews of "Suicide Watch"
Reviewed on July 21, 2004
(((Karla)))

I am glad this is only fiction! I have almost been to that point myself, and it is a place I don't ever want to visit again!

Powerful, hardhitting, and excellent write; well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >tears <

Reviewed by john zimmerman
Reviewed on July 21, 2004
powerful, evocative, and convincing

good write

john+

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on July 21, 2004
An excellent and very convincing write, Karla. Outstanding work, Poet.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 20, 2004
Frightning piece Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on July 20, 2004
(((Karla)))

Powerful write, I was worried when I read the title glad you are okay
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on July 20, 2004
A great piece Karla that brooks a frightening and disturbing subject .
We must always try and remain strong and optimistic in the face of adversity .

Hugz

Peter Paton

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on July 20, 2004
Karla...great to hear you are ok...great poem...very deep, very powerful verse...Fletcher B

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 20, 2004
I am happy that you are well. This is very powerful because so many feel this way and, unfortunately, some are not strong enough. This poem of yours matches exactly to the last one that I posted. Merci mon amie. Amour et paix. Régis

Reviewed on July 20, 2004
Karla,

A superb piece ... bravo! Glad that you're alright!

Your friend,

Robert

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on July 20, 2004
Wow, I am beginning to wonder what is in the water lately??? This is a great piece and I am relieved to hear that you are OK, please stay OK, OK? ;) It is kinda weird though the 'theme' that seems to be going around as of late. Well written Karla!

Love & Hugs, your Tx neighbor, JC xoxoxo

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on July 20, 2004
A truly unique and convincing write, Karla.

Reviewed on July 20, 2004
The poem, "Suicide Watch" is an outstanding composition. I did enjoy the rhythm and the artistic contents.

I salute You Sublime Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on July 20, 2004
i know you are stronger than any moment of self doubt. the poem is good though heart wrenching...never give in to that moment


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