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Gang Wars
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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This came to me while watching "Dr. G., Medical Examiner" on the Discovery Health Channel.


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Azure skies and golden sun
Surrounded by the clouds
Lightning flashes from a gun
Thunder scatters the crowd

The victim falls to the ground
No one sees anything
Ragged gasps the only sound
Of a soul that's dying

Rain bleeds from the open wounds
The victim breathes his last
Another one, gone too soon
More gang wars are forecast

(C) Copy written, July 24, 2004, by Karla Dorman.


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 Reviews of "Gang Wars"
Reviewed on July 26, 2004
Yeah Karla what everyone has said sad but disturbing. A forceful write.

Reviewed on July 24, 2004
Wow this is a powerful write
GOd Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 24, 2004
They sure are; tragic, but true.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 24, 2004
Excellent Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 24, 2004
Excellent analogy Karla! Fantastic write. Yes it is
disturbing, but life is more violent than ever, and the
storms seem to be too!

(of course you can use the pic,just copy it;-)

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 24, 2004
Interesting take on a thunderstorm, Karla, really totally different and meaningful...Peace, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed on July 24, 2004
scary and disturbing write, but so well conveyed! brava on a great job, karla!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :( >tears <

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on July 24, 2004
A prolific write, very well expressed. Thank you, Karla.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on July 24, 2004
A frightening and disturbing phenemonen in our unstable society Karla
Topical and important composition .

Peter Paton


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