Falling Stars (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 24, 2006

Bless God, it's just fiction, Karla!

Then I thought...but somewhere, it's true for someone..

This would make a good Hallmark movie!

Love&Hugs, Rhonda

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 20, 2006

Amazing write dear Karla!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by Connie Faust

Reviewed on October 17, 2006

Well, if this is fiction, you sure wrote it well.
You have me praying for your safety. That's ok, I'll do it anyway.

My #4 daughter used to pray daily that God wouldn't let anyone have any fires, especially our family.

You take care, Karla, and keep that hose handy.
Love,
Connie

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on October 17, 2006

Water it down Karla...let us pray for you and your sis. Times will be better I belive.
I do believe!
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones

Reviewed on October 17, 2006

Fires! Never mess with those things. They always have a mind of their own...good heavens, I just looked down and noticed Regis has said more or less the same thing: they seem to have a live of their own. Great minds, eh? :)

God Bless
Lots of love
Lena

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 17, 2006

Wild fires can indeed be terrifying, Karla. They seem to have a life of their own. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Steve Joos

Reviewed on October 17, 2006

Good description. I didn't know where you were taking me at first, but eventually it was made clear. Good job.

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on October 17, 2006

Am I the only one who saw humor in this? To me this is black humor at its finest. I hope I didn't miss the mark.
You write such good stuff Karla. I wish I had more time to read.
Chanti

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on October 17, 2006

Wow this is amazing
Keep it up
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Daring Sunshine

Reviewed on October 17, 2006

So real...feelings.great write! brava or whatever you call it... I'm still learning :)
Peace & Grace,
Sharon

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on October 17, 2006

"Now. I pray the Lord my
Soul to keep, as this would be a
Terrible way to die.....
"
Powerful Karla

Blessings,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow

Reviewed on October 17, 2006

My niece used to think this when she was little.. she'd scream when she saw one...) Neat little write!

Myrna

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on October 17, 2006

Karla

Quite a scary write, that raises the hackles on the back of your neck..

Can feel and simulate the scorching heat and flame just reading it !

Great work poetess !

Blessings

Peter

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 17, 2006

The fear of this is often so very real in lands where fires are as common in the summer as rain and my heart goes out for people who must endure this.

Fee

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on October 17, 2006

sure sounds real. glad it's fiction. Dawn

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on October 17, 2006

Good thing they burn up in the atmosphere, else uh-oh..

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on October 17, 2006

Thank God this is fiction. Fire can be a killer. Victor

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 17, 2006

That would be indeed a terrifying experience and one that you have captured extremely well.

Reviewed by Rusty Daily

Reviewed on October 17, 2006

I easily see the embers being the troubles we face in life and the water ready garden hose our strength to deal with them.
Rusty

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 17, 2006

Powerful, dark write; very well done, Karla! You have outdone yourself! Keep up the great poetry; you are a master at your craft, and it shows! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on October 17, 2006

The imagery is so rich and real here, Karla! I'm so relieved that it's only fiction. What more could a writer ask than to write something so powerful that a reader is left to wonder ... excellent poem, Karla!
Love and much respect,
CJ

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 17, 2006

oh my great imagery in this one Karla. sounds all to real
Good one!Eileen

Reviewed by Edward Lupinacci

Reviewed on October 17, 2006

This poem has me seeing stars
and looking to the unknown for signs of salvation