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Two Poems: HORRORS!
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Mwa-ha-haaaaaaaaaaa...Happy Hallow'een! (Not all things scary are imaginary monsters.)


TWO POEMS:  HORRORS!

Both (c) 2006, Karla Dorman.

"SCOTOPHOBIA"

Sunset, frightening,
as I watch pallid fingers
losing their grip on
the desperate edge of day,
thus beginning the
quickening slide into my
fear of the darkness
and extended night, ahead.

(10/14)

"VENUS FLYTRAP"

...and the walls breathe in/
out [[closing]] like--jaws
(read:  Venus flytrap
eating a bug)!!  heart
L E A P S over lungs, an
attempt to es c  a   p    e.
>>>claustrophobia<<<
has me where it wants
me, strappedtothebed.

(10/18)


 

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 Reviews of "Two Poems: HORRORS!"
Reviewed by Rebecca Burns (Reader)
Reviewed on October 23, 2006
Very descriptive, nice writing as always.
Rebecca

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on October 22, 2006
A trip to the dark side. Well done....M

Reviewed on October 19, 2006
A great write here
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
Reviewed on October 18, 2006
Ohh the darkness is leaping in and gripping..yikes...snapping and strapping...whoops...the pallid fingers!
xo Taylor

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
Reviewed on October 18, 2006
Even plants can be nasty, deadly and UGLY! Poor bug!

LOL
Lena

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on October 18, 2006
I know that Venus Fly Trap feeling...lol These are both great, Karla... enjoyed the read!

Myrna

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 18, 2006
Ah, yes, but what about defecaloesiophobia . . That seperates the weak from the strong . . . Nice writing . . .

Reviewed by Rusty Daily
Reviewed on October 18, 2006
Karla, I posted a big old long comment to these poems,pressed enter and it disappeared. What are you doing my dear. Anyway, it's always fun to read your fine poems.
Rusty

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 18, 2006
Karla,

Dark and very electrifying write my friend.

Reviewed on October 18, 2006
ready ready ready for halloween.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on October 18, 2006
Hmmmm, strappedtothebed (Thinks. Mind boggles)

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 18, 2006
Scary feelings from reading both of these sent cold shiver down my back. Good ones.

Fee

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on October 18, 2006
I agree with Kate. The suggestion of horror is more chilling than the gore. Victor

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 18, 2006
You know horror :-) It is not the gore, it is the suggestion.......and you have done this very well within these two write. The first one is my favorite......it makes me think of how one might feel as the night comes in when vampire's are lurking :-) It's a shame I'll probably have to kill you again hehehehe

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 18, 2006
Very spooky and very good....well done!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on October 18, 2006
Well done!!!

Reviewed on October 18, 2006
Horrors indeed; and you have captured the feelings of both phobias perfectly! Splendid writing, Karla; continue to soar with the eagles~! Your writing is definitely going places! BRAVA; very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on October 18, 2006
Two horror poems behind their shadows I see peace and love.
your brother Abdi-Noor

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on October 18, 2006
Karla, Dah-ling ... this is good! Spooky, yes, but then it should be for all frights night ... strapped to the bed, huh ... veddy interesting.
Excellent work! I loved them.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on October 18, 2006
Karla

A double whammy and potent mixture of fear and dread, which shows your expertise to express yourself in concise and succinct terms..

Bravo poetess

Love

Peter


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