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Two's Company. Three's A Crowd.
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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The tornadic storms of 12/29/06 b e g g e d to be written, but didn't form until this evening (NICE).

Thank God, thank God, none here, but just south of us...too close for my comfort!!

The wind runs fingernails up,
Down the nerves, shredding them like
Tissue.  What courage there was
Dissolves into the pitch, to
Be seen no more.  Another
Night spent hiding!  Another
Night screaming fear into the
Pillow:  damn fool storms.  Alone!
Except for terror to keep
Me company-----------------and the wind.

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman.  (1/2)

 


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 Reviews of "Two's Company. Three's A Crowd."
Reviewed by john zimmerman
Reviewed on January 5, 2007
chilling write,k.j.

john+

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on January 4, 2007
Vivid visuals, Karla...glad our season doesn't start until Spring
peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 4, 2007
Your Muse has been awakened!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 3, 2007
Great descriptive poem, and glad I'm not in it!
Hope the season ends soon...

Love,
ET

Reviewed on January 3, 2007
As always you capture the raw emotions of this kind of storm well, write on Karla and be blessed
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2007
Captured the Storms so well in this discriptive and imagery poem thank you ....
Blessings,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on January 3, 2007
And it isn't even springtime either. My heart and energies are with you two to keep you safe.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed on January 3, 2007
Whenever I hear this I always worry about the two of you. Please keep yourselves safe.

Well-expressed imageries and feelings!!!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Daring Sunshine
Reviewed on January 3, 2007
Fine description of Texas storms...just remember, that only last for a moment of time ((((((((((((((hugs)))))))))))))))) You are never alone dear Karla; that's God's promise!

Peace&Grace,
Sharon

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2007
A very plesent read, love Holly

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
Reviewed on January 3, 2007
Storms! Dear Karla, I have great respect for those things...the damage they churn up is frigthening indeed. You always manage to send shivers up and down one's spine with your chilling descriptions. Clever, really, dear poet and friend.

God Bless...
Much love and hugs
Lena

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2007
Enjoyed very much

Reviewed on January 3, 2007
The fear of storms is displayed to perfection. Well penned Karla

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 3, 2007
Very well written Karla!!

The imagery almost touchable!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 3, 2007
YOU WORD PAINTED THIS POEM WO WELL i CAN HEAR THE WIND HOWLING.

fEE

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 3, 2007
I love the energy of storms but not when they are completely "out of control." The weather here has been very wild this winter with much wind and water damage (I have been spared and I am grateful.) Thank you, Karla. Blessings to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on January 3, 2007
You've penned it well my friend...captured the truth within the storm.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on January 3, 2007
You've done a wonderful job of capturing the spirit of a terrible storm, Karla! Well done, my friend.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2007
We do not get tornados here, very rarely. But wind can be high and a nuisence. I hate the wind really. No company at all. Victor

Reviewed on January 3, 2007
Karla,

Excellent imagery and lines; you are really coming along as a poet! Brava; very well done! Keep up the great writing; you are really taking off! :)

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on January 3, 2007
Your write expesses such terror...I can imagine it well, had my fair share of the Florida hurricanes of 2004, not fun!
Hopefully they are all long gone for a long, long while...
Great write, even though...
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Rusty Daily
Reviewed on January 3, 2007
What courage there was
Dissolves into the pitch,

WoW, Karla, what a great line. I like the way you can pack so much into so few lines.
Rusty


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