used to the room going black, spinning, as if the storm reversed itself back into my bed. lightning flashes oneonethousandtwoonethou - : never reach three before the Howling screams me awake, neatly stopping the heart. happens again and again, these spasms of panic throwing me onto the floor safely out of harm's way:
A powerful offering my friend, kept me on the edge of my seat! Total opposite here, dry as toast! Nothing going on...I would rather not have storms...but a little rain would be a blessing! Hope all is well!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
So you use that ole onethousandone onethousandtwo...must be a good rule of thumb. Otherwise ....
it would have vanished into oblivion,
Like, "If you do that, it will make you go blind."
Well, I do need reading glasses now....is there a correlation?
Walt
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 3, 2007
Spot on... I love the Texan weather, it is so untamed. Kinda like a place where we ain't supposed to live. but exciting all the same...
Gripping write that most of us have all known in our lifes at one time or another...the weather can be the fiercest monster at times and we humble humans profess to understand it...not.
Fear didn't deterred Jesus, nor should deterr you to confront life.
Georg
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 3, 2007
Poeish and brilliant portrait of human mental fraility, Karla. Using the metaphor of a storm to correlate the fears inside is powerful . . . Very . . .
Oh I know that feeling well and I do my best not to think about it any more than necessary.....Like every spring.......Great way you have captured the essence.....
Good GAWD!! Looks like you're in a cavernous mouth full of teeth! *DANG!* What a scary pic! No WONDER you fear storms, have nightmares the way you do! Shoot! Outstanding presentation; brava! You keep getting better and better at spinnin' storms.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :) *BRRRR* If I have nightmares....LOL YOUR FAULT!!!!
powerful fears, Karla ... my daughter returned from Texas about three hours ago ... she said the thunder and lightning was pretty intense, even in the distance ...
Boom! Pain! Blackness!
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Blessings,
Joyce B.
it would have vanished into oblivion,
Like, "If you do that, it will make you go blind."
Well, I do need reading glasses now....is there a correlation?
Walt
Fee
George
Georg
You've meshed a small masterpiece of feeling and descriptive experience to tell the reader of impending doom.
We've skipped a heart beat, kept in suspense, and finally say with a sigh of relief: "She's Ok!"
Aloha,
Myles
John
ET
Be safe,
Karen
God Bless
Michelle~
Good GAWD!! Looks like you're in a cavernous mouth full of teeth! *DANG!* What a scary pic! No WONDER you fear storms, have nightmares the way you do! Shoot! Outstanding presentation; brava! You keep getting better and better at spinnin' storms.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :) *BRRRR* If I have nightmares....LOL YOUR FAULT!!!!