Crime In Progress (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on January 30, 2008

Keep safe and keep writing, you and Karen are both in my prayers...
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed on January 30, 2008

Karla,
I love the line "...pushing shoulders against the walls of my suddenly flimsy apartment". You personify the wind, making it sound like a football player in charge mode! Excellent!
Sheila

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 30, 2008

You really have bad weather on the otherside of this old world!!

Be safe sis!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on January 30, 2008

Aren't you ducking yet??????? storms don't like prostrated people, but just adore those curious enough (or dumb) to take their noses out to see how hard it can be...
Please, be safe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Georg

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on January 30, 2008

...hang on Karla...
and be safe...
John

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

Great descriptions!
Be safe...
Cryssa

Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

A little B&E, anyone? I love the pace and framing of each line. Brilliant description pulls the reader into your intensely real scene. Great job, Karla!

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

There's one thing about nature...she always holds the cards and makes us squirm.
blessings and love,
Susna

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

So true and when the winds blow the mind gets weary...

Fee

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

The title truly fits the poem. LOL
Hope all is ok.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

Those same winds are knocking at my door, too! Good writing
love, Carole~

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

You may well end up somewhere over the rainbow, Just get them ruby shoes... Stay brave, strong and get that structure made safe....

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

Oh myyyyyyyyy,great writing sweet lady..take care OK...Hugss

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

The walls were cracking?? GAD!! CHILLS!! I hope this wind settles down soon; no wonder you don't like windy days!! Having been in five tornadoes, I don't blame you for fearing the winds!! Excellently expressed terror in verse and image; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

Karla,a bad weather day all over the country, and you tell of the wind with excellence,letting me hear the howl of the banshee!

luv
et

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

Eek! This gives me the chills Karla...when it's really windy here and it's pounding at my door and scratching at my windows...I'm scared to death. A great write!

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

Yes, time will tell! ;)
The power of the wind.

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

Time will tell ...
And so will you,
and very well.

Walt

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

That's exactly what is going on here. How did you know. Great penned. Love your chilly friend in CO, Bonnie