There's tension between us
And it's buildin' up high
Gatherin' like black clouds
Movin' across the sky
--Refrain--
Thunder's crashin'
Lightning's flashin'
There's a storm movin' in
Sit here cryin'
Feel like dyin'
You broke my heart again
--Verse II--
The wind's been a-risin'
It's tearin' us apart
Kinda feels like lightning
Has struck my wounded heart
--Verse III--
The rain is fallin' now
Heavier than before
Flooding like the teardrops
They're fallin' on the floor
(refrain)
--Bridge--
Why am I so afraid?
The storm's out of control
Why do I feel this way?
Storm shakes me to my soul
Thunder's crashin'
Lightning's flashin'
There's a storm movin' in
Sit here cryin'
Feel like dyin'
I can't take this again
(repeat, and fade)
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i thought this would make a great
country and western song...what
do you think? if you'd be so kind,
i'd appreciate a response...(((hugs)))
and love, karla. :)
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Reviews of "There's A) Storm Movin' In"
Reviewed by Anthony Smith (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2002
Nice writing on this one...it does have a great feel to it....maybe even a Trisha tune...way to go!!
you are so right..this WOULD make for a great country/western song!! great use of words, packed with images. super job, karla!! (but then i am NOT prejudiced!!)
love and ((HUGS)) to you, sweetie!! love, me.
hugs,
Chris
Light and love, Jo
wonderful piece
great job
love and ((HUGS)) to you, sweetie!! love, me.