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Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

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There's A) Storm Movin' In
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
  
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--Verse I--

There's tension between us
And it's buildin' up high
Gatherin' like black clouds
Movin' across the sky

--Refrain--

Thunder's crashin'
Lightning's flashin'
There's a storm movin' in
Sit here cryin'
Feel like dyin'
You broke my heart again

--Verse II--

The wind's been a-risin'
It's tearin' us apart
Kinda feels like lightning
Has struck my wounded heart

--Verse III--

The rain is fallin' now
Heavier than before
Flooding like the teardrops
They're fallin' on the floor

(refrain)

--Bridge--

Why am I so afraid?
The storm's out of control
Why do I feel this way?
Storm shakes me to my soul

Thunder's crashin'
Lightning's flashin'
There's a storm movin' in
Sit here cryin'
Feel like dyin'
I can't take this again

(repeat, and fade)
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i thought this would make a great
country and western song...what
do you think? if you'd be so kind,
i'd appreciate a response...(((hugs)))
and love, karla. :)

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 Reviews of "There's A) Storm Movin' In"
Reviewed by Anthony Smith (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2002
Nice writing on this one...it does have a great feel to it....maybe even a Trisha tune...way to go!!

Reviewed by Chris Stevens (Reader)
Reviewed on August 11, 2002
wonderful write!!!!
hugs,
Chris

Reviewed by m w
Reviewed on August 11, 2002
Has potential. I can hear Garth or Reba singing it now :)

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Reviewed on August 11, 2002
Fatastic...!

Light and love, Jo

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on August 11, 2002
lady...you know you got a winner here
wonderful piece

Reviewed by Larry Skahill
Reviewed on August 10, 2002
agreed...I'll get my guitar
great job

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on August 10, 2002
Yes Karla it would make a great song,,,I can picture Toby Keith singing this with no problem,, great song! Lisa

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on August 10, 2002
I agree, too--absolutely would make a great song. Karen is right--"super job, karla!!"

Reviewed on August 10, 2002
you are so right..this WOULD make for a great country/western song!! great use of words, packed with images. super job, karla!! (but then i am NOT prejudiced!!)
love and ((HUGS)) to you, sweetie!! love, me.


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