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It's Your Call
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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... would rather it be your fist smashing me in the face, ....

Image (c) 2009, Karla Dorman

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trust doesn't mean a thing
when it's been betrayed by
lies and deceit.  feels like
i have been kicked in the
stomach:  would rather it
be your fist smashing me
in the face, for the pain
i'm in.  can't believe a
thing you say anymore:
you say i'm the bossy
bitch, giving you the third
degree:  maybe so.  but
what else am i supposed
to do?  things have got to
change, or one of us will
have to go:  it's your call.

(c) 2009, Karla Dorman  (9/17)
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 Reviews of "It's Your Call"
Reviewed by Ray { The Great Canadian Buzzard }
Reviewed on September 22, 2009
Once the trust is gone, it's all over
Good luck, sorry you have to go through this
Hope you can have a good day
The Buzzard
Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
Reviewed on September 19, 2009
kick him out!! a very emotional poem.
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
Reviewed on September 18, 2009
Wow Karla, this is a powerful piece, praying for you
In Christs Love
Michelle~
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 18, 2009
Wow! That ought to sop them in their tracks!

Hope everythings okay Karla! Stay strong! great poem!
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on September 18, 2009
Dirty lyin' dog!!...sorry dogs Patrick
Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on September 18, 2009
Hard hitting Karla, but you stand your ground...
peace, Carole~
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on September 18, 2009
Powerful and emotive, Karla. Nice!
Sheila
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 18, 2009
trust doesn't mean a thing
when it's been betrayed

How so very true.
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on September 18, 2009
Make sure that the door hit his ass as he gets the hell out of there!

Georg

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on September 17, 2009
OH! You go girl! Truth and honesty are the conerstones of a good relationship, and without them the two might as well go their separate ways. This is very heartfelt and very true too.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie.
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on September 17, 2009
It's one of the things I dislike most...dishonesty, lies. Well written, Karla with such feeling.
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on September 17, 2009
painful but well expressed!
Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
Reviewed on September 17, 2009
Lies hurt more than anything else. Great poem dear karla
Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on September 17, 2009
Honesty is everything in any kind of relationship. Your point is clearly stated.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on September 17, 2009
You expressed how lies can hurt deeply in such passonate way. Nice peome Karla.

With Love,
Cindy
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on September 17, 2009
..lies hurt big time..!
Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on September 17, 2009
I think I have met this guys twin. Good one, Karla.
Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on September 17, 2009
Karla,
No holding back here, telling it as it needs to be told.

John
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Reviewed on September 17, 2009
Don't know what to say.
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on September 17, 2009
OUCH ! Hang in there Karla and work things through. God bless.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2009
Kicking ass and taking names, eh?
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2009
You tell'em Karla.
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