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Gettin' In Deep
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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... we're there, sticky-determined: ...

Image (c) 2007, Karla Dorman


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We, the gum on the bottom of
your expensive shoes.  You
don't notice U.S., but we're

there, sticky-determined:  you
will only walk so far before
we'll stop you in your tracks ---

the more you try to sc.rape U.S.
off, the more we'll hang on ---
change shoes?  Fine.  Just

know this:  there's a pile of shit
waiting right around the corner.
You'll find it come November.

(c) 2010, Karla Dorman (1/9)


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 Reviews of "Gettin' In Deep"
Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on January 12, 2010
You preach it girl. With ya. J'nia

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
Reviewed on January 11, 2010
anger is sometimes constructive

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 10, 2010
Far too many piles everywhere these days, both right and left.

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on January 10, 2010
I definitely like the ending of the poem.It really says something in a powerful way that is in your face.Classic.take care

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 10, 2010
Imagine if that walk were done barefoot!!! (LOL) You only can take all of it with humor, like the man said, "if you cry uncle, they win!"

Georg


Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on January 10, 2010
So powerful, Karla.

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on January 9, 2010
Damn straight Karla! Love the anger and passion! We'll just keep hangin' on. These are the best of times, these are the worst times. Be a part of history...it's ours to win or lose.

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on January 9, 2010
Karla, let them know we all mean to see them replaced for gross dereliction of duty -- peace and love my dear friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on January 9, 2010
She's got the way of a woman with words. G-R-E-A-T Karla.

Newfie hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on January 9, 2010
...deep and direct Karla..powerful words engaged, great write
Love,Christine

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on January 9, 2010
Oh my. But oh boy do you have a bark. Add the bite and fight for what is right.

Our Special K. xx

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on January 9, 2010
Inspired! Well sustained point of view. xx

Reviewed by Carol Grace
Reviewed on January 9, 2010
Love it, love it, love it--your way with words always inspires.

Carol

Reviewed on January 9, 2010
You tell it Karla, thank you for sharing
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 9, 2010
kick butt
kool write Karla

Love & Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 9, 2010
Ab-sol-lutely!!!!! Ya did good dere . . .

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on January 9, 2010
lol. You go girl. Liz

Reviewed on January 9, 2010
That's tellin' em, Karla; you go, girl! Great write!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on January 9, 2010
You tell 'em. Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 9, 2010
ha--very well said!


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