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Monster Storm
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
  
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Verse ONE
I can feel the storm approachin', in my bones,
And I can tell it's gonna be a bad one,
There's gonna be a lot of damage tonight,
Lives ripped apart when the storm's finally done.

Verse TWO

When you come home late, from a night on the town,
I'm scared...i don't know if you're gonna be mean,
I tuck the children safely into their beds,
They're too young to witness you makin' a scene.

REFRAIN

Your abuse is like an approachin' storm,
It's causin' great harm and devastation,
You're succeedin' in tearin' your family down,
Better get control of the situation.

Verse THREE

It's gettin' darker with each passin' hour,
Flash!! brilliant lightnin' splits the turbulent skies,
And thunder shatters the black clouds overhead,
Wind drivin' rain pours down, and the waters rise.

Verse FOUR

Staggerin' in, you slap me across the face,
Screamin' at me...a high pitched noise fills my ears,
It's my two little boys...they've seen what you've done,
Tryin' to protect me...in spite of their fears.

BRIDGE

I'm gettin' away from the approachin' storm,
I ain't gonna put up with this any more,
I'll stay below ground, 'til the storm goes away,
I'm done with the abuse...now it's time to soar

REFRAIN

Your abuse is like an approachin' storm,
It's causin' great harm and devastation,
You're succeedin' in tearin' your family down,
Better get control of the situation.

TAG

Yeah, your abuse is like an approachin' storm
I'm gettin' control of the situation...
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thought this would make a great country song!

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 Reviews of "Monster Storm"
Reviewed by Larry Skahill
Reviewed on October 1, 2002
perfect country song

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 30, 2002
i can feel the country melody...

Reviewed on September 30, 2002
Fantastic write, fantastic song!!!!!

May Lu $*_*$ / Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on September 30, 2002
Karla, that concert really got to you didn't it! Fantastic song

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on September 30, 2002
Hi Karla,
I am with Eileen...
Sounds good to me :)

Trixie

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on September 30, 2002
sounds good to me!!!!
you go girlie

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 30, 2002
Karla, I'm inclined to agree with you, it is perfectly suited for country! Hope you can do something with it. All the best;-)

Reviewed on September 30, 2002
yes, it sure would. sounds like a top ten hit for sure!! great job, karla!! love, your twin, karen lynn. (((HUGS)))


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