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Before I'm Lost
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Homesick for Ohio ...

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'Before I'm Lost'

to time and memory,
I want to return to the rolling hills
and open skies
of the Midwest where I was born:

Life was kinder.  Gentler.
I remember:  the sun timed our days (just
as long as we
were home before it turned full dark).

Neighborhood kids gathered
for a game of baseball:  Dad, the pitcher
who'd celebrate
each time someone hit a home run.

The yearly drive to the
amusement park:  the excitement building
as high as the
coaster peaks on the horizon.

Summer picnics under
the Weeping Willow:  the air scented with
goodness from the
hot dogs and burgers on the grill.

Raking colors falling
from the trees in the woods behind our home:
it didn't seem
fair the neighbor's leaves would join ours.

Shoveling snow:  I was
The Designated One who had to keep
up with the storm.
Snow blower?  Not Dad:  he had me.

And now I'm in Texas:
been here a long time.  When asked where I'm from,
I always say,
Ohio.  Buckeye roots are deep.

(c) 2011, Karla Dorman (5/26)


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 Reviews of "Before I'm Lost"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on June 26, 2011
Karla, it is not possible for most of us to forget our roots. Sounds like you are longing for yours in the Buckeye state my dear friend. I bid you love and peace. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on May 29, 2011
Lovely, Karla, the poem and the poems within. Read each first lines all the way through, each seconds, and thirds and .. finals. In emotional terms, I felt like the author described my childhood, poignantly, in relative pasts.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Reviewed by Lori Maynard
Reviewed on May 28, 2011
Great poem, Karla :) I remember when I was little, we made the yearly trek to King's Island. Favorite memories. Though I still reside in my home area, it never feels as it felt when I was a child.

Reviewed by Micki Peluso
Reviewed on May 27, 2011
Karla,

Woderful poem--I remember doing all these things too and having a happy childhood, though not rich. I think our kids today are missing so much of what made our childhoods great. well written!

Love Micki

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on May 27, 2011
You trigger memories of where I grew up, too, Karla. I like the way this piece reads...the glimpses. Great work:)
Sheila

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 27, 2011
Enjoyed this, your loyalty and longing for your home is apparent...ever thought of returning there.
fee

Reviewed on May 26, 2011
You know what i live in the same small area I was born but I get nostalgic too, I miss the long summer days, sitting on the porch swing with my cousins sipping Country time Lemonade, but I am blessed in the moment as well, blessed because I have friends like you...Thank you for the memories!!!
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by K. Mulroney
Reviewed on May 26, 2011
Boy this brought back memories. Always out till dark. Never in the house, unlike most kids today. My childhood was not good, but inside everything bad,you can always find a smear of good. This did that for me, thanks Karla.

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on May 26, 2011
You wanna be an ex of Big Tex.
All my ex's live in Texas.
Well Dorothy, tap your red shiny shoes 3 times and say...
Keep smiling and singing Hi Oh, Hi Oh, It's off to Ohio I go!! xx

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on May 26, 2011
Ah, good old Cedar Park in Sandusky. Patrick

Reviewed on May 26, 2011
Wonderful nostalgia in this poem, Karla; I hear ya! I am homesick for Ohio too! I HATE Texas!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 26, 2011
Well, if nothing else it would be alot cooler, probably even in summer...though that pesky snow would be around alot longer too...guess you gotta take the good with the bad...ed


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