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reprieve *fiction*
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
  
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VERSE ONE
the air is sticky and so slow so slow
humidity presses down presses down
its gettin hard to breathe oh dont you know
its fixin to come some rain gon to drown

VERSE TWO
its not just the storm gon get me get me
gon drink my troubles away far away
dont care if the storm leaves me in debris
my hearts breakin apart this cloudy day

REFRAIN
bills wife leavin laid off what else what else
everthins piled top my head my head
im just a dangfool ashamed of myself
it might be better off if i was dead

VERSE THREE
hurricanes comin oh so fast so fast
the wind risin waves crash crash on the shore
i dont know how much longer i can last
waters comin in underneath my door

BRIDGE
dont wanna die in this watery grave
but my broken heart cant see no way out
how i wish i were courageous and brave
instead im a coward i have no doubt

REFRAIN
bills wife leavin laid off what else what else
everthins piled top my head my head
im just a dangfool ashamed of myself
it might be better off if i was dead

VERSE FOUR
wake up see an angel of light of light
seems ive been given a reprieve reprieve
God saved me in me He saw somethin bright
through all my troubles He aint gonna leave

SECOND REFRAIN
through all my troubles Hes there oh Hes there
He aint never gon leave my side my side
all i have to do is call out in prayer
Hes my refuge in Jesus i can hide

REPEAT SECOND REFRAIN

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all i have to do is call out in prayer
Hes my refuge in Jesus i can hide


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 Reviews of "reprieve *fiction*"
Reviewed on May 5, 2003
Very interesting karla. Honest expression in your own way.

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
This is wonderful!!!
Does it have a melody yet!!!
wow

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 29, 2003
Wonderful tune it could be..
I need your e mail
sketch is done
sketch.arkansas.net

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 29, 2003
you and Karen must do a duet, put it on a wav and upload like I do;-)sounds like a good one to me!

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Reviewed on April 29, 2003
Yes, could definetly be a song..It shows talent..Wonderful sweet{{{{ Karla}}}}Please ask your sis to stay at the poetry site..I will miss her toooooooo much if she goes..(sad)..

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on April 29, 2003
Now Ms.Karla I would love to hear you sing this marvelous write.:)


tony

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 29, 2003
This is excellent.... Could be a song.... Peggy

Reviewed on April 29, 2003
This was excellent, I loved these poem so much, very inspiring!

Reindeer

Reviewed on April 29, 2003
awesome write! loved the last few verses! powerful! ((((HUGS))))


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