ridin the rails (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on June 11, 2003

Enjoy those rides...enjoyed this write!!

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on June 10, 2003

Wonderful write....hate coasters myself!
~Trish~

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on June 10, 2003

Hi Karla, That I ever tell you I met Carley Simon once? I loved this write, Sweet Lady!

tony

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on June 10, 2003

sounds like fun the way you describe it - though I also rather stay out to avoid throwing up !!!!!!! Good write. Love. S.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 10, 2003

Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...good happy go lucky girl!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 9, 2003

Your a brave girl
Have fun
Your friend Ron

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on June 9, 2003

Hehehe,.No thanks..I'll keep my feet on the ground...but loved the ride from here..
Hugs
Jenni

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on June 9, 2003

Ha! This was great, You took us on that ride with you!

Loved this,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on June 9, 2003

Wow girl you go!!
"blue streak* *mean streak*
*gemini* *corkscrew* *raptor*
*wildcat* *mine ride* "
Smiles
Peggy

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on June 9, 2003

Its all about the excitement and thrill...is it not? Great write.
Amor

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on June 9, 2003

This brings to mind one day last spring when I visited my son in Florida. We went to Busch Gardens and I was rushed from one coaster to the other. Quite frankly I hadn't ridden a coaster in many many years and was the color of death at the prospect. I rode and had a wonderful time. Felt the child in me come alive again. It will always be a special time for me that I will recall with grandiose bravity.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip

Reviewed on June 9, 2003

Have fun, Karla. I66 is enough of a thrill ride for me.
Leland

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)

Reviewed on June 9, 2003

Too bad the sucker's been grounded for repairs; not that anyone in the line noticed. Good thing for all those bathroom passes, eh? **chuckle**

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on June 9, 2003

Karla, I wish you luck on those roller coasters. I'm not going anywhere near them/ Your fun little write was close enough for me . hugsnlove Grady

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on June 9, 2003

Sounds like you're having fun! Good for you!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on June 9, 2003

Wonderful exciting write on Rollar coaster. While your out that way also enjoy the nature! Beautiful place. Love the bike trails there.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 9, 2003

nooooo, thank you...me thinks i will stay off top thrill dragster, thank you very much! there has GOT to be a limit to insanity, and that is about as pure t insanity as you can possibly get! YIKES! :0 (t.t.d. makes wicked twister look like a CHILD'S ride!) a very good write; enjoyed! love, your (wigged out) twin (at the thought of ridin' the top thrill dragster), karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :0 *screamin' like a banshee, here* *~*~*YEEEEAAAAHHHHHHHAAAAHHHHHHHH!!*~*~*