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bad ones *fictional*
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~~dedicated to ER nurses everywhere,
who sometimes see more horror in one
shift than one does in a lifetime.~~
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there was a very bad one that came in last night,
and when i close my eyes i can still see the sight,
the images linger--they'll cause me to lose sleep,
when i think of what i saw, i break down and weep...

the little girl who drowned in the family pool...
the teacher who was raped by someone after school...
the family who was burned in a house fire...
the young man who died when he grabbed a live wire...
the old woman who had acid thrown in her face...
and i'll never forget the young woman named grace...
the little girl who was left inside a hot van...
the couple that was caught in the collapsed bridge span...
the young lady who aborted her baby boy...
the fight for life (we lost) for firefighter roy...
the young woman who was beaten up, left for dead...
the woman who lost so much blood, my scrubs were red...
the homeless man who was shot by a teenaged punk...
the little boy who was locked up in a car trunk...
the depressed woman who jumped, wound up paralyzed...
don't forget the little girl that was circumcised...
the gay man that was brought in, bleeding (he had aids)...
the teenaged girl who was scalped, machine caught her braids...
the young executive who was stabbed in the heart...
what more could i have done...it's tearing me apart...

there was a very bad one that came in last night,
i've promised to do my best, won't give up the fight,
the images linger--they'll cause me to lose sleep,
when i remember, i sometimes break down and weep.


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 Reviews of "bad ones *fictional*"
Reviewed on June 12, 2003
This waqs one heartwrenching poem, but an amazing one, thank you for helping us to see a night in the life of an er nurse.
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2003
Wonderful write, about people we don't hear about often enough. {{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}

Reviewed by David Alexander, Sr. (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2003
Excellent Poem about some true hero's..
God Bless...Poppa aka David

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on June 11, 2003
Oh Karla, this is the most heart wrenching poem I've read in a while.. You brought it all to life..it's so very sad...
Hugs from your island friend..
Jenni

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2003
I considered the nursing field but I knew I would not be able to walk off my job at the end of the shift. Great write and tribute to the life savers.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 11, 2003
This was amazingly well done Karla!!
You can rhyme like no one can...without getting one single dime..lime...time..twine...devine twist in your tongue.....hehehehehe


Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2003
Vividly described, moving tribute...
Excellent, indeed, Karla!

Reviewed on June 11, 2003
A very excellent tribute, I just do not know how they do it, unbelievable,

Reindeer

Reviewed on June 11, 2003
You write in the first person, which is outstanding!!!!! Salute to ER nurses everywhere....
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed on June 11, 2003
a bone-jarring tale of just what many nurses and doctors in the e.r. have to endure each and every day...vivid imagery and real feelings of the stress that they must endure each and every day. a raw and gripping write; well done, karla! (((HUGS))) and love, your twin, karen lynn. :( >tears <


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