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Hidden Clues
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There are days when the dream becomes so clear

There is no difference in being awake
Or conscious I am hallucinating genuine visions

When voices appear as real as vapor
And faces are episodes reflecting substance

When matter is as illusory
As the perception of the molecules within it

When blood fills my thoughts with particles of wonder
And my flesh is a portal to another world

There are nights when living becomes as unfamiliar
As the dreams I am searching through

When the stars are symbols to the distance of time
And space is the acquiescence of becoming alive

When shadows running across the walls
Are archetypal anomalies arousing my muse

When dreaming is not sleeping
And life is beaming with hidden clues
    

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 Reviews of "Hidden Clues"
Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on July 20, 2005
you describe it perfectly

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 5, 2005
Weird, man, weird. Have you had it examined? ;-).

Ron

Reviewed on May 2, 2005
Unleashing the power of your creativity.... Oh, the hidden clues are a tease to the writer's imagination! Seeking those clues of destiny, and, perhaps, discovering a clue that becomes an awe-inspiring turning point. Miracles, mysteries...and seeking an intimate moment with words. This is visually enticing. Thank you. Embracing....

Reviewed on April 22, 2005
Another great write!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on April 10, 2005
An interesting look at the different states of mind :-) I like the last two lines the best.

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2005
I agree with Regis! Wonderfully written ...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 8, 2005
"When dreaming is not sleeping
And life is beaming with hidden clues"
I love these verses and the whole poem as well. The imagery enhances the meaning intended. Thank you, Jude. Love and peace to you. Regis


Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on April 8, 2005
Meaning is carried on the wave of the dream and the dream is life itself. No, you said it way better :)

Reviewed by Ann Marquette
Reviewed on April 8, 2005
Wow! verrrrry deep. Love the visuals.

ann

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 8, 2005
A gem with lots of hidden facets...

Eileen

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on April 8, 2005
well done

Reviewed by Dave Harm
Reviewed on April 8, 2005
Our dreams, carry us, give us strength, to keep hoping, to keep moving forward... we are what we dream... and our dreams can come true, if we believe... excellent write

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on April 8, 2005
A Unique and intresting piece that speaks to those that seek.

Paul;-]

Reviewed by George Jackson
Reviewed on April 8, 2005
Outstanding work, Robert. Keeper.

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on April 8, 2005
"The world is a dream, and the dream becomes a world."

Friedrich von Hardenberg



Love ya, Shaman.

~~Nordette

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on April 8, 2005
That last stanza says so much to me.
Excellent piece!

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on April 8, 2005
Your writing is always so unique...beautifully written...

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 8, 2005
Hidden clues are everywhere - but we must look for them.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on April 8, 2005
Ah, the eternal goal to find oneself. Well done

Reviewed on April 8, 2005
Life is constantly giving us clues through dream, and dream is constantly giving us clues to life. You sail masterfully, guided by that hidden compass, through a route that becomes manifest.
Love&Light*
Alexandra*

Reviewed by KJ McPhee
Reviewed on April 8, 2005
yeah, i think you're connected with your subconscious in a profound way, you're having awesome dreams and it makes you wonder who is directing them? Is it the fourth dimension friends that visit us when we're sleeping. The subject is fascinating and there ain't nothing like a dream to wake you up! k

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on April 8, 2005
I am not mathematical in a scientific kind of way, but I am artistically "ordered within chaos", and like an information "micro-chip" in the way I sort things through, I think... to me this reads like a beautiful and perfect matrix, both in form and in sentiment, Jude. It is perfectly structured and balanced and it has a dramatic tension like the order of the universe that might appear random and haphazard - but is as mathematical as you can get! Math is Art, Art is Math... don't know how I quite got to this QED, but this goes straight into my Library as The Matrix of the Computed Synopsis of the Conscious and Unconscious Reality of Life!! :)) Whatever the old PT does for you, it obviously works! Linda's comment adds a wonderful dimension to bring to this, too. And, for some reason, it reminds me again of Dale Clark's great poem which says: "Love is real. You dreamt it" which I found so provoking. 10 outta 10! TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on April 7, 2005
Robert, this is intriguing. I loved it. I may just put it in my archieves (with you permission, of course)
Bobbi

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 7, 2005
"When dreaming is not sleeping
As I locate life’s hidden clues "

Bullseye....perfection!!

You a genius Robert!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on April 7, 2005
This poem brought a smile to my face, Robert. I could identify with every line and I fell into your verses without even realizing it. There are always hidden clues if we take the time to notice them. If we tune in, we can set our pathway in life with those "signs." Excellent write. Peacefully romances the soul.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on April 7, 2005
What thoughts our "dreamweaver" stirs! This is the time of visions and dreams. Jung spoke of a universal psyche and archetypes that were similiar in every culture. Do our brains carry memories of mankind's past? And are we given glimpes into our future? You spoke of matter being illusory. Gravity and perception being the only things holding us together, it certainly could be thought as such. And the more that we learn, the more questions we have to answer,which is shades of 'Alice In Wonderland'.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 7, 2005
Still sounds as if the 60's were REALLY good to you, Bob...(Prepare yourself there is lots of rain heading your way from South Jersey, pouring here now...) Ed & Rufuz


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