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Lifeline Kiss
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On this cold night I built a fire
So you could warm up your hands
(And give me a chance to get closer to you)

We watched the flames grow
As the fire exhaled sparks into the air
Like dancing stars superimposed on a crisp and blackened sky

And we observed the smoke curl up before our eyes
Forming phantom images

Mesmerizing our gaze
While importing our smiles into each other’s hearts

Our voices gelled our minds
Melting away
Any distance between us

You said this miniature blaze reminded you
Of the time when you were caught up in a humongous forest fire

And how the flames just passed by you as if you weren’t there
And all that remained were burned out tree skeletons
Howling across the sky

And you recalled how the lightning spawned
Electric fingers dancing across the sky

And the smoke rose into the air
As the darkened temperament of nature’s capricious character

And you remembered, how strange it was
That all you could think of was being by the shore
Looking for me to sail in safely on the waves

Now all that matters is we are warm on this beach
As I smolder your fears with a lifeline kiss
   

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 Reviews of "Lifeline Kiss"
Reviewed by Blue Sleighty
Reviewed on March 30, 2006
I doubt that you need one more person to tell you. Your poetry is beautiful, romantic, and sensual. Appealing to all of the senses.


Reviewed by Anne Williams (Reader)
Reviewed on March 1, 2006
echoing what others have said...very intense. you wrote in a way that made me feel as if i was there across the fire watching the sparks of the interaction. sometimes you just know a person will be there for you.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 26, 2006
Romancing the warm of a fiery kiss.

Ron

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on February 25, 2006
As the fire exhaled sparks into the air
Like dancing stars superimposed on a crisp and blackened sky

What a wonderful visual in words. I could see the fire's sparks rising into the sky. A million thanks for this wonderful picture.

Bobbi

Reviewed on February 25, 2006
Another great pen from a master of imagery.WTG

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on February 25, 2006
Yes as Sage said it is intense and sensory.
I too can see that you've captured the
five elements to enhance this work. Excellent!

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on February 25, 2006
This is an intense work of sensory awareness. The five elements, one for each point on the pentacle are present--->air, earth, fire, water, and spirit. The sensations from within are like the stars which only appear when the artificial lights are turned off and the lifeline kiss called upon. This is purely a moment charged with electric chemistry!

Sage

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on February 25, 2006
Ah...romantic. You do these romance lines well Robert. I think you may have a golden streak of treasure lying somewhere just beneath your skin.
Wonderful write once more! Enjoyed.

Lisa

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on February 25, 2006
Wonderful romance.

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on February 24, 2006
a fire on the beach is sure to warm the heart of the coldest fish-girl, Jude. nice writing, Dawn

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Reviewed on February 24, 2006
Sweetly sensual. R

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on February 24, 2006
Ooooooo... so many lines could cause me to be cheekily naughty after a couple of measures of El Capitan, that's for sure.... But I'll be good and just say that you set a scene that holds the tension well between several moods and trains of thought, trafficking emotion in a heightened state between minds and bodies in close proximity. Sparks fly upwards for certain sure here! :)) And far be it from me to take issue, as you know (!!), but think perhaps the intention might be to finally smother those fears, rather than smolder them, no?! But what the heck if it's done with that lifeline kiss.... Makes me think of your words: "Phuck it... I'm goin in for a swim"... you said it, not me!! :)) Think I'd better go and smother my face with a pillow before Poetry School tomorrow... Seriously, this is tender and full of anticipation, Jude. Gives me warm expectations for my up-coming trip to Margarita!! TY LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Joyce Hale
Reviewed on February 24, 2006
A beautiful scene you set, Jude, with your fire to keep out the cold; a most romantic scene. Is there no end to the romantic moments we can conjure up with beautiful words? I certainly hope not! Well done. Peace. Joyce

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 24, 2006
Hauting imagery with a blissful ending!!

Great work Jude!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Janet Parker
Reviewed on February 24, 2006
This conjured up my two favorite smells, woodsmoke and salt air. Brilliant poem. Romantic, but not blatantly so. There are layers beneath that aren't spoken. To me, a "lifeline" kiss is a perfect description of total committment. Beautiful write, Jude.

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on February 24, 2006
Oh, what Sherry said. LOL. She's said it well. I really enjoyed this write, Jude. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on February 24, 2006
The moment is romantic, but I can see a bond being formed too, as you reach out to her and pull her through the darkness to stand in the light created by the merging of two souls. Those who give us “lifeline kisses” are the ones that we remember forever, though often their very knowledge of our vulnerabilities, too quickly, seems to destroy the ability for the relationship to be more than a lifelong friendship. Excellent writing, Jude. This one shines!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 24, 2006
I love this one, there is somthing truly magical and hypnotizing about a man, a woman, a fire and a beach. Perhaps it is some basic longing for warmth and companionship but whatever it is you have trapped the essence of that image in this write. Well done my friend.

Felix

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 24, 2006
Nothing quite like a smodering kiss.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 24, 2006
A lifeline kiss - simply marvelous, Robert. And those are truly the kisses we never forget.

Reviewed on February 24, 2006
Joseph,

Spectacular romance sizzles!! Excellent!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on February 24, 2006
filled with passion nicely done

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 24, 2006
I agree with what Peter has said as this is truly a wonderful and romantic poem you have woven with words that only a master poet knows how to weave.
George

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on February 24, 2006
Top drawer romantic and impassioned poetry Jude
I reckon one of your very best, amongst an endless and diverse stream of cerebral and inquisitive writes.
Peter

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on February 24, 2006
Very romantic, heart touching write. I would have to say that I enjoyed the first stanza the best as it opened all the possibilities :-)

Reviewed on February 23, 2006
A beautiful romantic poem

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on February 23, 2006
She should be chewing on your neck about now, Robert. (smiles)
Well done...

Reviewed by Edwin Larson
Reviewed on February 23, 2006
You've captured such a wonderful romantic moment here..."importing our smiles into each other’s hearts"... and laced with a bit of flirtatious fun..."So you could warm up your hands(And give me a chance to get closer to you)"... Enjoyed this...You go Jude :)!!!


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