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Conditional
by jude forese → (All Poetry by jude forese)
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So you think it’s all about you

You haven’t the slightest idea what I’ve been through
Or really care, just pretend to

So you’ve returned
And prance about the place

Secretly toying with the possibility
That I understand the truth behind your motives
So you avoid me like the plague

But that’s ok
I always knew it was about you

And that your warmth was always conditional

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 Reviews of "Conditional"
Reviewed on January 9, 2008
Perfect.

Reviewed by deleted deleted (Reader)
Reviewed on December 27, 2007
Brilliant. Glad we understand each other. ;)

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 24, 2007
Sounds like a stalker to me. But you know how to handle them.

Ron

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on December 22, 2007
I feel like you are in the shadows saying these words as she wanders, deaf to your voice. Excellent. Simply excellent.

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on December 21, 2007
Wow sounds like this love runs hot
And just like the weather it gives no warning it just
Changes from hot to cold
Well Jude you deserve better
I know you will find it, take care
Excellent view of thoughts and a
Brilliant write!
Wishing you an abundance of blessings of
Peace Love and Joy....Merry Christmas....Morning Star


Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on December 20, 2007
When a relationship does not offer an equal amount of give and take from both parties, fulfillment will never be a reality. The heart can play tricks on us for a time, but at some point, the brain takes over and the fog that obscured our judgment is lifted. Cast out the dagger that has pierced your heart, Jude, and allow yourself to heal.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on December 20, 2007
pretty sad write-it is indeed a rare thing to find unconditional love in the every day world

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on December 20, 2007
Even in a sensual dance...the cold breath of a dying love can never revive it.

Susan

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on December 20, 2007
every being has freedom of choice...take care of you

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on December 20, 2007
wow!!!
speechless~~~wonder if they were too
nice~clear~share

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on December 20, 2007
You is a mind-reader, Kartero. Funnily enough, these self-same sentiments floated in and out of my own brain for about a millisecond a day or two ago, and then were gone. But what, then, happened to all those mastered little gigabytes that were so yielded a little while back?! Have all the operating systems got their wires crossed already? :)) Toying prancers are known for their blow-hot, blow-cold ways. Perhaps you need to stick to a good, honest, full-bodied radiator.... You take care of you and stay plague-free. Our health, mental, spiritual and bodily, is the one thing that sadly DOES demand certain conditions in order to be able to maintain it's own equilibrium. Kough-kough Kate xx

Reviewed by R Beeman
Reviewed on December 20, 2007
being one dimensional doesnt work for two. truthful write Jude

always,
randy

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 20, 2007
Go for that real love
Excellent write..

Reviewed on December 20, 2007
Jude,

This one has pain written all over it...sad. :( You deserve better--hope you find it.

(((HUGS))) and love, and Merry Christmas,

Karla.

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Reviewed on December 20, 2007
You've been writing some doozies ... Surround yourself with people that are positive, Jude ... Lose the chick! ;) Wonderfully expressed ... Be well sweets ... (((hugs)))

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 20, 2007
Sounds like someone returned to your life who really isn't welcome! I agree with Amber, you deserve better than conditional love!And it's not okay, let it go!

Reviewed by Brian Pellerino
Reviewed on December 20, 2007
Jude,

Exorcise that demon! Pour your considerable might into the prose and unleash hell. You'll feel better.

Until then...

B

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 20, 2007
Conditonal anything is a baddy!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on December 20, 2007
Sounds like you are enduring a tough one Jude. But ... sometimes the roughest rides can end up in smooth waters. Love, at times, wears many different faces, and depending on the soil, can, at times take awhile to root. Stand Strong!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 20, 2007
Good capture of conditonal relationships. Sharp and to the point.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on December 20, 2007
Conditional love is not good. It is energy draining and unhealthy, There is no love lost here Jude, move on..You are better than this.
Much peace, love and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on December 20, 2007
a very pointed piece, deftly wags a crooked finger. .
succinct and sharp. .
gotta detest the fairweather
ness

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 20, 2007
Ouch, sounds like a bitter/sweet type of love, as the love can't be ended the bitterness grows. Sad but all too real sometimes.

Fee


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