Damn You ,Allan Jackson (poem) by stan n nassano on AuthorsDen

Damn You ,Allan Jackson
by stan n nassano → (All Poetry by stan n nassano)
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Damn You, Allan Jackson Tearing apart my past Piece by piece A struggle Bolts frozen in place, time rusted Sweat dripping, sour All That needs to be done To do it all alone Like it always was The way it seems to go Another job That needed done Everything disassembled Old way not working A different approach taken A new tool Ordered Fire up the chain saw Let it rip, away Screaming through the memories Like all those yesterdays Turn it all to Ashes Standing next to a heaping Pile of tires Refuse collected Storage My temporary desktop Hillbilly music playing Singing an Allan Jackson Melody Shit damn, not that Song Talking about Love How it used to be �Remember When� Go away tears, not again I thought I worked past All this Melodrama I thought Damn you Allan Jackson Now you got me going Crying You troubadour I do Remember With out trying Snassano08-29-07

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on June 1, 2011

I don't know who Alan Jackson is but if he inspired this you need to listen to him some more - put the remembrance of pain aside and write with the music. Another stunning write!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on August 30, 2007

Stan it takes time, sometimes it takes a lot of time and a lot of honest grief and a big chainsaw. Powerful write.

Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)

Reviewed on August 29, 2007

tremendous~
speechless~
ness

Reviewed by Southern Comfort

OOOOOO WEEEE Aint nothin like a Broody Baby, to get the Mother Gooses
all a flutter! Soon they will smother yore poor head in soft titties and you will forget all about what is a troublin Ya! Sounds like Ya already got Ya a date to skinny dip, I know the neighbors is gonna like yore full moon! Be Sweet Stanly! Yore Little Buddy SC

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Awwwwwww,I told you we should go swimming,hell with ALLAN JACKSON...be well sweet man...HUgsssss
Love,
Chanti Lace xo

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

stan........that one tore my heart out also

Walt