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Striking
by Dale Clark → (All Poetry by Dale Clark)
  
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You strike me
with your beauty
Bolts of lightning
could not enlighten me
like you do

I find you striking
My thunder crashes
rumbles and rolls

You pierce my heart
with your bolts of joy

I breathe your sweet air
swear we’ll never part

My vision is clear
as I gaze into the storm
like crystal I see through
it promises no fear
only ecstasy

Rain pours from my soul
You strike like a tornado
You’re pure power, sweet lover

I’d give up my heart
to see your passion flow

You are so striking
Your beauty electric

I’ll thunder for you
just to see your lightning

© 2003 CJ Clark
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 Reviews of "Striking"
Reviewed by Marlene Dawn
Reviewed on August 10, 2003
I love this!

*Marlene*

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
WOW!!! Dale!..lucky girl ..whoever she is!!!
the line 'You are so striking
Your beauty electric'
Woderful...

vesna

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on August 8, 2003
CJ,
This is so awesome.
"Rain pours from my soul
You strike like a tornado
You’re pure power, sweet lover

I’d give up my heart
to see your passion flow

You are so striking
Your beauty electric "
PJ

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on August 8, 2003
A tempest orchaestra of romantic poetry, BEAUTIFUL DALE!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 8, 2003
Striking write Dale....this is really very beautiful!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Brittany Renée
Reviewed on August 8, 2003
I only hope every woman is lucky enough to have a man feel this way about her. This is superb, Dale. Great expression!!

*:.Brittany Renee.:*

Reviewed by Marley Jensen (Reader)
Reviewed on August 8, 2003
Magnificent expression of the beauty in passion.

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on August 8, 2003
This is fantastic! I love those last two lines as well...wish I wrote them LOL
Excellent.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on August 8, 2003
"I’ll thunder for you
just to see your lightning"

I love that line!
~Jackie~


Reviewed by Floreann Cawley
Reviewed on August 8, 2003
very good write..Floreann

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on August 8, 2003
Wow,yes,this is striking poetry.


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