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You strike me
with your beauty
Bolts of lightning
could not enlighten me
like you do
I find you striking
My thunder crashes
rumbles and rolls
You pierce my heart
with your bolts of joy
I breathe your sweet air
swear we’ll never part
My vision is clear
as I gaze into the storm
like crystal I see through
it promises no fear
only ecstasy
Rain pours from my soul
You strike like a tornado
You’re pure power, sweet lover
I’d give up my heart
to see your passion flow
You are so striking
Your beauty electric
I’ll thunder for you
just to see your lightning
© 2003 CJ Clark
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Reviews of "Striking"
New Poetry by Dale Clark
*Marlene*
the line 'You are so striking
Your beauty electric'
Woderful...
vesna
This is so awesome.
"Rain pours from my soul
You strike like a tornado
You’re pure power, sweet lover
I’d give up my heart
to see your passion flow
You are so striking
Your beauty electric "
PJ
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
Love Tinka
*:.Brittany Renee.:*
Excellent.
~Chrissie
just to see your lightning"
I love that line!
~Jackie~