My dad's a Pontiac man
smells like car oil and old motors
little black streaks
irreversibly claiming a spot
on his thin white tank top
if you get close enough to kiss his cheek
and I do
maybe you'll smell a little Natural Light
there's always salt on his nose
his sprigs of sandy blond hair
blowing in the warm Georgia breeze defiantly
his smile is almost always sarcastic
pushes lines and dimples into his tan cheeks
skin leathery and dark from working in the sun
yeah he's a Pontiac man.
My dad has his problems
but don't we all
maybe I'd like to see him stop drinking
maybe I'd like to see him smile a little more
hell I just want him to be happy
I've always looked up to him
(even now when I'm almost the taller one)
the picture of strength
maybe he wasn't always there to be my rock
but I never stopped loving him
and he was forgiven before it was due
over the years others would try
but they could never really destroy
that imposing image of him
that imperfect but infallible faith I held in him
yeah my dad has his problems
but so do I.
I have my memories
ghosts from long ago
and I guess I'll never really know
which were dreams and which were real
but now, finding myself an adult too
they seem just vague traces
of a book I read
a life I left behind ages ago
he wasn't always the hero
if I remember correctly
but I couldn't be more proud
of the man my dad's become
and even though the memories are there
I love him more every day.
My dad's a Pontiac man
he speaks with a southern slang
and holds a surprising intelligence
and when he wants to be
he's even gentle and kind
like when I come home crying
because my girlish little heart is in pain
and he holds me
"Did you think they broke the mold after him, girl?"
comforting like no one else could
my dad...
is more than I could ever ask for.
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Reviews of "My Dad, the Pontiac Man"
Reviewed by C. Gourlay (Reader)
Reviewed on February 18, 2002
thank you for this touching glimpse into your heart April ~
You really do deserve publication April. This reveals a lot about men in general. Excellent insight.
Reviewed by chris
Reviewed on February 17, 2002
Great work as usual. Very timely poem. I just lost my father on 2-11-02. His death got me writing poetry again (a couple are posted - one was buried in the casket with him), but it was not the type of inspiration I really wanted.
Thanks so much,
Michael Bauer - signed in case the top reads someone's name other than mine.
April, As a woman who has no Dad, I would have liked this kind of Daddy, Imperfect is forgivable. Sandi XXX
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Reviewed on February 15, 2002
you're so lucky to have a dad, april, mine died when i was a baby, so instead of memories, i have fantasies i have built about what he might have been like. but i never know. this really touched me
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of your Dad and obvious love for him. ((HUGS))) Janet xoxoxoxo
Thanks so much,
Michael Bauer - signed in case the top reads someone's name other than mine.