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The wise eaglets and the climbers’ souls.
by Peter J. Oszmann → (All Poetry by Peter J. Oszmann)
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(A little brainteaser story.)


Poem Artwork


 

 

 

 

 

Two climbers climbing on a steep rock face

Found eagle’s eyrie high up at the peak

Two little eaglets nested in that place

With probing eyes at the climbers to peek.

 

“Ah eaglets!”-  climbers greeted the young birds

‘N losing their grip into the deep they fell

And died. Their souls once again climbed upwards

Towards the eaglets, yet again to yell:

 

“Ah eaglets!” - and the souls floated content.

The eaglets looked and quietly they yawned.

“Ah eaglets!” – souls gave one more compliment…

…But eaglets, being wise, did not respond...

 

                        ********

 

 

(In case you missed the point, wondering sad,

Just think of what the eaglets might have said

And if you find the words, don’t hesitate

To let me know. I’ll eagerly await.)

 

 

©P. J. Oszmann (2000)

©Illustration created in Publisher & Photoshop (2002)

 

 


As – judging by the comments received – only one person managed to get the point right, below I give the


 


Solution to the riddle, or what the eaglets might have said if they were not wise.


 


It seems almost everyone missed the point


- For the climbers the church bell sadly tolls -


What eaglets might have said could disappoint;


It wouldn’t have been wise to respond: “Ah souls”.


 


Got it?




 

 


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 Reviews of "The wise eaglets and the climbers’ souls."
Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on August 17, 2004
LOL!! Yes, I get it- with your help at the end, I guess I am slow at this late hour!! Very funny ;)

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on August 17, 2004
Hmmm....
Maybe they'd have said something like "already occupied"?
No, don't think so. Has to be something more intelligent. No idea, to be honest. Pls drop me a message and let me know okay?
Hope you are okay and things will be back to normal soon.
Love
Amira

Reviewed on August 15, 2004
(((peter)))

this is a thought provoker...hmmmmmmmmmm will have to get back to you with my answer

you weave entertaining poems--EXCELLENT write!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

hope all is well--

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on August 14, 2004
"Ah eaglets, get the hell off the top of my mountain, I climbed it, and now its mine, go find another nest and herein I don't jest...!" LOL! I doubt they are the right words but still that is what I would be sayin' if of course I would be crazy enough to climb that mountain in the first place...Hope your Well, Peter, Ed & Rufuz


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