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United
by Rebecca Lerwill → (All Poetry by Rebecca Lerwill)
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The color is intense
like the blue of a lover’s eye
sparkling star - lights
dance high above the sky.

The waters of a river
glide as smooth and slow
like soft caressing hands
on velvet skin they flow.

High welling mountains
reflecting nature’s grace
as do her lovely breasts
with fingertips they’re traced.

White and silent clouds
puff weightless through the air
just like delicate kisses
from tasting lips they share.

A never-ending wind
embraces and holds near
spoken as whispered words
from a lover’s tongue to ear

Where the horizon re-unites
nature and the sky above
like a melted couple
do heaven and earth make love.

 


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 Reviews of "United"
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on February 3, 2008
A beautiful write my friend, outstanding imagery!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 3, 2008
Oh boy are we at the same spot or what??

Well penned !!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2008
Thanks for sharing your gift with us
Sunshine and Blessings
Ron

Reviewed on February 2, 2008
I LOVEeeeeee your style of writing and with such an easy flowwwwww...
Beck, so glad I gravitated to your corner and I plan to STAY!
Now that I am Tracking/Following your heart and soul, to where... Who knowsssss... but I intend to follow...
Warmest Blessings, LOVE, Inner LIGHT and Hugs, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo

STay Positive!
Btw- This is a gem I plan to savor and treasure!LOVE your Heart BEck!

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on February 1, 2008
An outstanding beautiful write
Peace & love

Wiliiam

Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller
Reviewed on February 1, 2008
Wow--Fee told me about you and I'm glad he did.
This is lovely. I loved the gentle pace with each line conveying calm, beautiful senuality.
Really enjoyed.
--RaeLynn

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 1, 2008
you're ole gezzer must love you... forsure...

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 1, 2008
Lovely, simply Lovely!

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on February 1, 2008
Rebecca,

I love your metaphors throughout the verses. You write with beautiful poise and flair. Peace, Love and Blessings, Paul.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 31, 2008
lovely write

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on January 31, 2008
...this is pen...of human nature...and of both...you have created a beautiful union.
well done Rebecca...
John

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 31, 2008
Becca, you really brought this poem to life with your amazing ability to use metaphor to perfection,with such simplicity!
Utterly beautiful, a keeper!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on January 31, 2008
It was always there. But only you knew how to poetically verbalize it so fluidly. Beautiful work Becca. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed on January 31, 2008
Beautifully illustrated pasion, Rebecca, well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 31, 2008
Such soft yet vibrant sensuality could only come from the mind by way of the heart of a sweet passionate woman. It is truly a lovely write and one of your finest....
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by ellen george
Reviewed on January 31, 2008
Becca - You MUST publish a volume of poetry!!!
Heaven and earth make love and such beauty - magnificent!
Each poem is a gift to us.
becka


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