Valentine's (sad) humor (poem) by Rebecca Lerwill on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 23, 2009

you're too modest Becca -- as usual, your work is terrific -- this is a happy little acrostic -- got to agree with you too -- nudity sure does enhance sexuality -- much love and peace my dear friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on February 19, 2009

WOW, now that's expressing a Valentine Yawn
Still as honest as can be and creatively written Becca!
Immaculte Nudity will stick with me!
Trauma too I won't forget as Lovers Experience...
Hope your day was filled with special loving memories still...
That day is filled with commercialism in my view, I think being creative is more spicy.
WRITE ON!
Warmest of Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady SHEExooo

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on February 16, 2009

Kool Liked it
short by sweet
Loce & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on February 15, 2009

Hey Rebecca,this is not a lame acrostic.It is very good.To be honest with you,I think Valentine's Day is one of the most overrated holidays of the year mainly because of the fact that it is a hallmark holiday and it is too commercial.Plus Valentine's Day is sort of like a slap in the face to all the single people out there who doesn't have that significant other in their lives.Plus it shouldn't take one day for people to love each other.Thank you for sharing this,take care and thank God the Valentine's Day weekend is over lol

Edwin

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on February 15, 2009

After your poem I will always remember Valentine as a immaculate nudity in front of aroused lovers......sigh!

Georg

Reviewed by ellen george

Reviewed on February 14, 2009

This is perfect Becca - you are brilliant!
Happy Valentine's day to you and Troy!
ellen

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on February 14, 2009

i agree! clever little acrostic!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce

Reviewed on February 14, 2009

This is neat!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on February 14, 2009

I see no reason to apologize here...it says what it is & what it is it says...ed

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 14, 2009

I don't do Valentine's Day because I have nobody. I am not looking, but still, it's just another day to me. Good points you raise; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

happy Valentine's Day anyway!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 14, 2009

Well Becca if this is the best you can do it is definately hot, passsionate and sure got my mind running on high speed. I agree about the too much commercialism and glad to see I am not alone in thinking that way. It is nice to recognize the ones we love with a nice card, flowers or even a supper out but I believe it has become way too expeensive by the greed of the stores and restaurants etc.

Hugs to you sweetie
Fee

Reviewed by Carin Spirit

Reviewed on February 14, 2009

What Valentine's should be... Not sad at all! Warmth and Love to you. Carin'