Perfection (poem) by CJ Heck on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 19, 2006

Was it Dave Barry who described all those 70s songs like "Little Deuce Coupe" as "men writing love sonds to their cars"? Your poem is a cutey. Cheers, Jim from Oz

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

Oh this is LOVELY!!!!!!

Love,
Dove

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

Nice twist at the end, CJ, you really had me wonder for a bit there!
You're quite a poet, my friend. Impressive!

God Bless
Love, Lena

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

very, very, very clever! (:

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

BEAUTIFUL,, So romantic.. CJ

Reviewed by Lynn Barry

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

Brilliantly clever, I love it!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

An unexpected twist here CJ
thank you
a pleasure to read

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

Nice twist, CJ. Thanks for sharing your wit. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

CJ ...

You certainly brought the hammer down on this one. Delightful write with a twist.

Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

LOL what a treasure, you got me, just when I had settled in for some hot steamy thoughts I got the punch line. Well done CJ
Fee

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

Oh my you got me!!

A stinker for sure!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

Oh I love surprise endings, that twist in the tail. And you certainly twisted us all. Victor

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

you are as Rusty said a stinker, but I will add a clever stinker...you had me all the way to the end. I loved it, I needed a smile this afternoon, it's been a rough Friday..but a wonderful one, glad to be alive...
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Brett Moore

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

"as we move as one"- hilarious CJ.

Reviewed by Rusty Daily

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

You stinker you. Thought this was to be one of your excellent 'grownup' poems and you fooled us with this sudden twist. You know how I hate those suprise endings. chuckle chuckle
Moulded to perfection Hugs
Rusty

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

Clever write, clever you! Good stuff yet again, CJ; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

A wicked twist of the pen..........changes the whoooooooooole story! You got me, CJ, thanks for my laughs for today. Needed 'em.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

WELL DONE!

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

HA HA! You had me going with the first few lines and then WHAM! Great piece! Michelle

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on October 13, 2006

Hahaha!!!! LOL!....

CJ, you really have your readers going for a while! Very skillfully-written indeed!!!!!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)