today
the universe
is coursing
through my veins
I hear its
loud, insistent
energy flowing
in my blood
beating with
my heart
its rapids
rushing, streaking
through turns
at one
with the wind
it awes
and fuels
my wonder
waiting,
waiting,
waiting,
something's coming
something wonderful
is coming
I hear it too and it is high blood pressure about the burst my eardrum. Or, it is a blood clot closing in on my heart or brain. ;-)
It just goes to show you how vivid your phrasing was and how I begin to feel your words pumping my blood and sympathetic rhythm. A pretty good trick I'd say.
Ron
Reviewed by s g (Reader)
Reviewed on February 1, 2011
Hi CJ, I like the positive message in this poem. Susan
This reminds me of the song Richard Beymer sang in West Side Story -"Something's Coming". I can nly hope that something wonderful is coming my way.
This is nicely written and very well thought out. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and walk by your side. With love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister Barbie.
I feel the anticipation in this piece. And yes, something wonderful IS coming if we let it. Love and harmony is on the way, but it isn't an outside force, it comes from each of us. What a great poem! Thank you.
Your words are so positive and uplifting; as I read, it is like the anticipation one experiences when one opens a present. Thank you, CJ. Love and best wishes,
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It just goes to show you how vivid your phrasing was and how I begin to feel your words pumping my blood and sympathetic rhythm. A pretty good trick I'd say.
Ron
GOD BLESS YOU
TONY
This is nicely written and very well thought out. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and walk by your side. With love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister Barbie.
Namaste,
Christine
Peace,
Dayvid
John
Regis