I'm not sure about this one. I'm trying to get it to say something but I'm not sure I've done it. All honest critique is welcome. You can even tell me it should be deleted.
He was a scared, scared man, who
never learned to say “I can.”
He would always wildly rant
“you ought to know that I can’t.”
He should have known that he could.
If he wanted to, he would.
Failure seemed to rule his life
as he avoided the strife
He finally took time to pray
and read his Bible every day.
It soon meant a lot to him
and gave his life extra vim
God helped him to rearrange
to make the “scared” letters change.
When he saw what they said
the “scared” had become “sacred”.
There are many who don't believe in themselves. This poem speaks to them. Finding God will always lead you on the right path and life becomes sacred not scared. Well said, Larry.
Larry-
Don't you dear, change a thing, well it's your poem and IF you feel it necessary, Ok
but, I loved your how you got your message out there!
Negative can be turned around as a positive (the words-the feelings)
Reading the bible recharges your spiritualness I find, but daily I don't find that kind of time.
Sacred is positive, and Scared is a negative! AS Faith follows!
Good going! Glad it was shared to you!
WArmly, Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeoox
This is good inspiration. - Nothing is impossible if we set our hearts and minds to it. Faith heals all wounds.
I like how you have re-arranged the word "scared" into "sacred". One only needs to turn the words "scared" around to turn one's life around. It makes a lot of sense!!!
Intuitively, I know I've lived many lifetimes, and none more interesting than the one I'm living now. However, being born an old soul somehow did not excuse me from the same job I share with you and that is learning to craft a positive attitude about
Intuitively, I know I've lived many lifetimes, and none more interesting than the one I'm living now. However, being born an old soul somehow did not excuse me from the same job I share with you and that is learning to craft a positive attitude about
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Be safe,
Karen
Don't you dear, change a thing, well it's your poem and IF you feel it necessary, Ok
but, I loved your how you got your message out there!
Negative can be turned around as a positive (the words-the feelings)
Reading the bible recharges your spiritualness I find, but daily I don't find that kind of time.
Sacred is positive, and Scared is a negative! AS Faith follows!
Good going! Glad it was shared to you!
WArmly, Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
It is a keeper indeed.
Christine
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
I like how you have re-arranged the word "scared" into "sacred". One only needs to turn the words "scared" around to turn one's life around. It makes a lot of sense!!!
Sandie May Angel :o)