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The Waiting Room
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I wrote this poem as I sat and watched people playing on their cell phones. No one spoke. Sounds of silence.

 

 
We used to talk to people
on our left and on our right.
We’d talk about our family
or what we did last night.
 
We’d meet a perfect stranger
and soon he was a friend
then someone else would enter
and we’d do it all again.
 
Sometimes we talked politics
a topic that wasn’t wise
or we could pass on gossip
and other kind of lies.
 
Nowadays it’s not the same.
Our isolation has grown.
We sit in a waiting room
and play games on our cell phone.
 
I tried to be like others
and I reached for my phone
which wasn’t in my pocket
so I sat there all alone.

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Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on January 17, 2010
This is so true. I sometimes remember the good old days when all we had were beepers. I got one because I was on call for the hospital. It did free me up so as not to be stuck by a phone all day and night. But now I even see people who don't have a car walking down the side of the street talking on a cell phone. You would think they could call sombody for a ride.

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on January 8, 2010
How true this is, Larry. That's why I love the conversation with folks of an older generation-- having also been brought up that way, I always say I would talk to a tree if it would listen, lol-but seriously, there is so much to be learned about life and living it, caught in conversations with strangers-especially for us writers. I really love reading your work, Larry. You never fail to entertain, educate and show an understanding of what great writing is. Blessings, Michelle

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 7, 2010
We have become a seven billion bunch of strangers to each other!

Georg


Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on January 6, 2010
Awwww, it is sad when people lose the art of conversation and opt for the games on the telephone. I do play some games on the computer, but never tried the telephone. I hardly use it anyway. Cute write and it does show the changing ways of society..

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 6, 2010
If I go insane you can find me by the trail of bloody cell phone users as I make my way trying to rid the world of the damn things.

Reviewed by Darryn Murphy
Reviewed on January 6, 2010
good poem


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