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Mr. Fee's Bath --- Kate - Sweet As Sugar
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Mr. Fee’s Bath – Kate – Sweet as Sugar


By Kathy Armijo 


 


Is there any significance
To a house numbered sixty-nine?
Been wondering since
I was nine.


Oft walked passed this lovely house,
Saw beautiful women walk in
Thinking to myself,
Must be a teahouse.


All grown-up now,
Think I’ll walk in (for a cup of tea)
With my bible by my side.


As look around –
This hymn comes to mind:
            “Rock” of Ages
And words like these aren’t far behind:
            Rise above it all
            Everlasting 
            Strength
            Power 


Now I know,
The outside of the house
Was really just for show.


But, I think I’ll stay a while
And keep Fee safe from the swarm
Of unconscionable women
And their temptress storms


While enjoying Fee’s red wine
And strawberries d r i p p i n g
In chocolate.


 


 


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 Reviews of "Mr. Fee's Bath --- Kate - Sweet As Sugar"
Reviewed on September 20, 2007
I like this - It will take much to conquor Sweet Fee!
Definit. Strawb.s dripping in warm melted chocolate
would be a desire in a home numbered 69 or any other time!!!
Warmly, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox

Stay Positive and Happy!

Reviewed on September 18, 2007
Great write Kathy. Someone has to protect Mr. Fee. Stay on the job. You never know what he'll be up to next.

Reviewed by J. Pajot
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
Entertaining and enjoyable write. Very light hearted and fun. Much enjoyed.

Jim

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
Strawberries and chocolate are the key to the house of 69.

Ron

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
You go girl...great response...BRAVA!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
creative and alluring offering ... nice!

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
96 69 the back to back or front to front the numbers tell the tale. Me thinks Fee likes to be swarmed by temptresses all. Else would he provide the red wine and chocolate dipped strawberries?
Great write!! I'll help you try to keep our Fee from harm, but we may have to tie him to the mast to keep him from joining in.
Anne

Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
Even the church lady knows how to have fun. Loved it.
--RaeLynn

Reviewed by Charles Keller
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
Interesting metaphor. I wrote one titled "Sixty Nine" a couple of years ago. Check it out if you dare. But it's for adults only. I like your poem.

Reviewed on September 16, 2007

I enjoyed this presentation quite interesting and unique one must say.
All the best and enjoy,
~Gwendolyn


Reviewed by Joyce Devenish
Reviewed on September 15, 2007
Hi Kathy,
I wondered why I thought of 96,(It was an Australian show.) I need an american education. Anyway it sounds delicious. Best wishes...JDM

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on September 15, 2007
Oh...I thought it was number 96, must of got the numbers back to front, darn, oh well I missed the strawberries n Chocolate.

:):) Ch'erie

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 15, 2007
So light and lively, a very precious write....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on September 15, 2007
Kathy anyone that writes like this , will easily get pass me as I try to protect that dear cousin of mine, Great write and thank for giving me one more reason to smile.
Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on September 15, 2007
I liked the way you carried this work. Sound just like the bible under your arms.
Well done

Allen

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 15, 2007
Well gee, with Rose along to protect my virtue, and you with angel wings fluttering softly around and Raelynn signing on as an employee my dream of heaven on earth still has a chance...

Good one Kathy.

Fee

Reviewed on September 15, 2007
Enjoyed this one, Kathy; you have done Fee proud! Very well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. ;D

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on September 15, 2007
Oh that number nine seem to pick up six sticks whenever it is inclined. Enjoyed

Reviewed on September 15, 2007
Oh my oh my, what a classy hot lady you really are!!

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on September 15, 2007
Wow! What a write...creative indeed, enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed on September 15, 2007
Whoo-hoo, back open for bidness!!!!!!!! Love it, Kathy, well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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