within my eyes
i am noticing the world
with another view
if you were all the hes and shes
and if i were all the shes and hes
we could blend the knowing
all is well
and actually consider
the great mystery
that makes us believe
we are separate creatures
we are all connected
by universal light
each snowflake unique
to melt on our tongues
and slides down our throat
as refreshing liquid
then flow into
the warm inside
to sustain the very
breath of life
we breathe together
eternity infinite
and touch heart to heart
always knowing
what always fulfills
and truly endures
is simply
i love you
I... I... I'm completely gobsmacked. Great write Debby!
Happy New Year!!
*-Brittany-*
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on December 26, 2002
This is quite a view of blending and exchanging Debby. You are filled with love and it shows for all the world to see. Bill Murray
Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on December 26, 2002
Beautifully expressed, Debby. Love is the only thing that endures--love for each other, love for humanity. In the words of Che Guevara: "Let me say, with the risk of appearing ridiculous, that the true revolutionary is guided by strong feelings of love. It is impossible to think of an authentic revolutionary without this quality... One must have a large dose of humanity, a large dose of a sense of justice and truth, to avoid falling into extremes, into cold intellectualism, into isolation from the masses. Every day we must struggle so that this love of living humanity is transformed into concrete facts, into acts that will serve as an example."
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Happy New Year!!
*-Brittany-*