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deja vu
by Debby Rosenberg → (All Poetry by Debby Rosenberg)
  
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Pull into the driveway I glance at the lawn
Thick and lush.. it needs to be mowed
Drag out the mower and pull the cord
Nothing happens...I pull several more times
Check the gas and the throttle all is in order
I pull on the cord a dozen more times
Again and again it just won't start
Exhausting myself beginning to sweat
I lay down on the lawn to catch my breath

Gaze at the sky fall into dreamscape
I see your face
Smiling so kind you reach for my hand
Pulled to my feet a hug and a kiss
We are shifted to eagles and soar above
Over tree tops
wing tip upon wing
Higher and higher gliding the thermals
Freefall down in spiral dive
We mate in the air and spash into the lake

Shifting to fish we dart through the reeds
You flush out the minnows for us to eat
Upon the bank we shift into cats
Your teeth on my neck
Your claws on my back
Mating intensely with animal urge
Growling and purring
With spring time call
Shift back to human I lay in your all

Beeeeep! Hmmmm....i purr

Oh lord I'm in traffic daydreaming again
Someone is beeping to stay in my lane
Get back on focus drive myself home
Pull into the drive and
notice the lawn
thick and lush.. it needs to be mowed


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 Reviews of "deja vu"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
real W.I.L.D.S. ;) (wake induced lucid dream state)

Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Wonderful write..

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
A wonaderful daydream of a poem
Well composed
into excellence

William

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Debby,
Glad I am not the only one who daydreams! lol! This was a very whimsical write, I enjoyed it much!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed on April 4, 2003
This was excellent! What a lovely day dream...love the deja vu at the end!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Great daydream. Very nice. :)

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
cute....

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Love this one!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Debby this is one I wish I
wrote;-)...whimsical and wonderful!

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Debby, loved your poem. Don't care for mowing the lawn but I hate shoveling snow even more.

Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Haha! LOL! This was great!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Ain't that the truth, that damn Scott's Turf Builder crap works almost too well.


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