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Inside Acuminous Eyes
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Love Expressing Passion Embracing Souls Searching Visions Finding Hearts Speaking
Inside Acuminous Eyes Ardisia called into the silence of quickening; Climbing upon the perfuming hillside of promised hope. Gathering before the prismatic canvas of glory; She spoke to the sage of wisdom’s embodiment… Fluttering along the wings of birthing challenges; Soaring under the essence of translucent rain drops; Their omniscient pelting of copious emotions sang; Resounding their prescience into the darkness of renewals… The gloaming sphere of destiny canvases empyrean slopes; Releasing our beatitudes into the rise of celestial visions. Emotional carriages are our embracement’s of ensouling integrity; Offering crystalline infinitudes upon passion’s breast; Giving us all these devotional wings to fly… Soaring before the percipience of tomorrow’s awaiting dream; Let us gather inner balance within the sageness of affinity’s possibility. Outstretching our arm’s soul into the northern winds; Embracing the clarity of our essence through perseverance; An awakening of our descrying souls will be found through love’s deliverance… Embowering quietude’s tenderness under the harmonies of serenity’s peace; With this ubiquity of visions knowing the heart of those healing streams; We will find our destiny deep inside acuminous eyes of reflections mirror; where all searching heart’s of truth may go… (Written: November 6^th, 2009 9:08 a/m) In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love Embraced ~ Embrassé poétesse d'amour ~ poétesse romantique Copyright© 2009 Poetess Victoria L. McColley

Reviewed by David cox (Reader)

Reviewed on November 9, 2009

beautiful poem with echoes of an ancint greek love story, and the photo's are so right as usual .
stay happy.
dave.

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on November 8, 2009

"...Let us gather inner balance...Outstretching our arm's soul into the northern winds;"...just two of the wonderful thoughts and images in your extraordinary writing, Vickie.

John

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Stunning as always dear Vick, thank you for sharing...
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Again, Victoria, in the uniqueness of your language of love,
I seek to soar under the essence of translucent rain drops...

-gene.

Reviewed by Jms Bell

BEAUTIFULLY DONE...THE POSSIBILITIES THAT LIES WITHIN US ARE LIMITLESS...IF WE LOOK WITH KEEN 'VISION'...THEN TRULY, WE CAN DO ALL THINGS THROUGH CHRIST! YOUR PEN REACHES 'BECKONING' THE READER TO SEEK HIGHER HEIGHTS. THANKS FOR SHARING THIS NOTABLE WORK. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Very cerebral and well done, Vickie. No need to hope for the answers, they are usually within our own self.

~W~

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Embowering quietude's tenderness...make one to wish a lighted fireplace and a soft and cuddly company as snow flakes crowd outside the windows.
Eyelids go down and we can see the shadows of oneself heart.

Georg