Nice thoughts Dawn...there is so much to absorb from your poem...whether the view of Nature or the grasp of whispers ...we only need to escape into the very silence of both...
What a beautiful sight, Dawn. The play of nature in God's beautiful creations. Your gentle words give life to the stunning photo. Well done! Peace and love in Christ.
Beautiful connection with the pines...I enjoyed this gentle expression
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on March 5, 2010
I love those moments; I love my evergreens and their unique and mystical voice. This speaks to my heart. I am drawn to the "alone.ness" that is made less "lonely" through kinship with the natural world.
Lovely words made more so with skilled writing. Whispers among the pines continue to capture our hearts for all kinds of reasons. This is excellent wringing!!
OBSERVATION...BRINGS CLARIFICATION; WHAT HE'S DONE FOR OTHERS(EVEN NATURE)...HE'LL DO FOR YOU. WORDS OF CONTENTED HOPE. THANK YOU DAWN...YOU DO GO THERE...BEAUTIFULLY. GOD BLESS YOU. LOVE,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Just love how the title flows off the tongue.
And the context is lovely. Night, soft breezes
through the pines, a clear sky, ones heart and mind
attune to wisdom and direction ... very soothing.
Blessings ...
richard
Just beautiful, Dawn. I'm glad to see you post a poem. It's even more impressive to know this poem comes out of a transitional period for you. Stress crushes my creativity. This poem reminds me of my poem By Candles' Light. In it, two flames dance, and I'd seen that part vividly when writing it. I saw your dancing shadows just as vividly, and there is a slight sense of eerie to this piece, too. Awesome work!
Sheila
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 25, 2010
This is almost breathlessly in its scope, Dawn. Funny you should incorporate pines in your poem. I wrote one yesterday which has "a bed of pine straw bed." Again, this is pure poetry.
David
Cryssa
Axilea
Regis
nice work...
Art Sun...
Carol
Sheri
Thank you, Dawn !!
xOx 'Pea' xOx
be well, poetess,
carolyn
Lovely words made more so with skilled writing. Whispers among the pines continue to capture our hearts for all kinds of reasons. This is excellent wringing!!
Love & peace be with you
William
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Be always safe,
Karen
And the context is lovely. Night, soft breezes
through the pines, a clear sky, ones heart and mind
attune to wisdom and direction ... very soothing.
Blessings ...
richard
George C.
Quite the winter wonderland today.
This is really beautiful.
John
Christine~
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Sheila
John
Georg