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And Then
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And Then


"...'s my birthday,"
His blurry mind thought
As the car sped down the long dark stretch of highway.
The moon ran alongside it,
Looking almost close enough to touch.
He giggled to himself,
Thinking of putting the moon in his pocket,
Bringing it home and throwing it on the table
In front of his girlfriend.
"There ya go! Just like I promised!"
Boy, would she--

WHUMP!

He never saw the truck.

Time went away for a while...

Then came back,
Red and yellow fangs of pain biting into him
The prehistoric scream of metal being untwisted
And the floodlights of the news cameras
Making sparkles of the blue and white lights of the cruiser.

As the red river of his life
Flowed into the burnt grass,
He glimpsed the moon again,
And heard the hiss of a giant radiator.
He giggled to himself,
"Hey, here's my 15 minutes of fame!"

And then--




I wrote this poem after watching possibly drunk drivers zooming down the highway to the beach... it made me wonder what people thought about as they sped their way to fatal accidents.

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 Reviews of "And Then"
Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2003
I to agree you sent out a great message! Very nicely written

Reviewed by Shar Phoenix
Reviewed on December 23, 2002
Beautifully expressive and sharp as broken glass, this is a meaningful work. I'll be checking back for more!

Reviewed by Sharon
Reviewed on October 12, 2002
Great job here and terrific message. Really liked this.

Reviewed on October 8, 2002
excellent message and write!! DON'T DRINK AND DRIVE; they just don't mix!!! love, and (((GENTLE hugs))), your friend, karen lynn. :)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2002
I like the way you went into the mind of someone and then came up with this prose. Excellent work. Thanks for dropping by my port.

Reviewed by Tova Gabrielle
Reviewed on September 14, 2002
This little slice of life is very immediate and believable, as if I were in his body.

Reviewed on August 27, 2002
excellent message...great read. just slow down, your life ain't worth it to rushrushrush. DON'T DRINK AND DRIVE. (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(

Reviewed by Vicky Jeter
Reviewed on August 26, 2002
Darlene
Extraordinariy insightful and creative.
My husband and I were recently caught in a traffic jam the went for miles and hours behind a fatal car crash--this helped me process out feelings I have carried from it for days. I thank you. Vicky

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2002
Excellent message... and welcome to the Den.


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