clouds of breath billow crisp air marks the fall equinox stark branches paint portraits in the clouds rustling leaves caress broken branches abandoned on rolling hillsides brushed by sunlit splendor
a dark crevice yawns the descent begins beneath the roots into the flesh of mother earth pungent and moist the darkness calls promising revelation of sights unseen
helmets bring light to caverns of crystal and lime the drip drop sing song of rivulets babble to blind fish and supersonic bats stalagmites stagger between streams of clear water arching majestically into daggered concavity threatening mortality
i crawl through layers of epidermal earth passages and galleries that separate chasms of dark promise the faint sound of nightmares clamor just beyond the light
cold cool earth smells like home melds with skin brown against brown promising a return to her component elements an oath of reintegration
crumbling
disintegrating
falling through time and space engulfed by elemental forces held in her dark and wondrous grasp
behold
skin breaks and buds peek through photosynthesized by darkling light reminescent of day flowers burst into life purple blue and green with vibrant energy verdant and fecund prana flows away from life-giving sun
thoughts slow with turpid regurgitations black presses in circumscribing movement awareness expands flies free of the body widening in concentric rings of being meeting earthworm and insect the atomic structure of eternity life and death circle ever in motion fluctuations of state signal cyclic understandings conscious belonging permeates the void purposeful and brilliant with glory
sound intrudes upon the silent song fingers grasp dirt and rock light beckons firm hands grip weathered roots and i rise back into the light the evening sun crests upon the horizon spears of light illuminate oceanic heights bearing solemn witness to earth's stately passage through heaven's court
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Reviews of "Beneath the Roots"
Reviewed by fare good (Reader)
Reviewed on March 9, 2004
Another master peace oh what a blessing to be honored by a brother with such mastery of writing this is beautiful continue to teach if I may my King the sons of great prophesies.
This is like Adam the Earth Father, or like being a seed...a sprout, this poem would be awsome put to animation!!!
i really liked it!!
pretty trippy!
happy holiday............Anita
I agree with the others. Your imagery in this piece is spectacular to say the least. Terrific write, Mark. You took us there in style and splendor.
Best regards,
Leland
Exquisite, Mark!!! Just...wow. Plumbing Mother Earth, lovingly, adoringly, thankfully alive, she breaths breathe into us all. Have you heard of Kartchner Caverns, here in Arizona? One of the biggest finds of the century. My daughter's class went to see it last year, she was thrilled, I hope she felt, in some way, what you've penned. Adulation and humbleness. Gratitude and thankfulness. :)
Haven't even started the third verse, holidays getting in the way of mind, soon. Happiest of holidays, Mark, hope you did well in your midterms!
A book of nature inspired poems and essays, written from the heart and soul of a life-long nature, animal, and wilderness lover, and dedicated to today’s children - Earth's only hope for a better tomorrow.
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..indeed it does sending me into a rage..however it's of short duration..
Thankyou for this magnificent piece..you're brilliant!!!..Just love your work!
vesna :)
Great imagery
William
Reindeer
Perfect poem for contest!
i really liked it!!
pretty trippy!
happy holiday............Anita
~Chrissie
Best regards,
Leland
Haven't even started the third verse, holidays getting in the way of mind, soon. Happiest of holidays, Mark, hope you did well in your midterms!