You cast beautiful pink roses
upon the shore knowing that
I’d come along and gather them
You wrote me a note in the
sand, and it asked if I would
spend this special day of love
with you because you know it’s
what I’ve always dreamed of.
Placing two blossoms behind my
ear, I waited for you to come, and
when you did, you called to me
in a sweet song and beckoned me
come
I let the water carry me to you
and you gently gathered me up
and soared through the warm
sea; parting it skillfully with
ease
We leapt from the depths to touch
the sky and you rained shimmering
droplets of water on me like
diamonds from the sun and they
fell to the ocean’s surface and
disappeared beneath.
We rode currents for miles - just
me in your world where there is no
hurry and time doesn’t exist.
On this special day of love - with a
special friend, I have experienced
the serenity of freedom, and made
memories from a dream that came
true
This is so beautiful and mesmerising Marilyn. I love it.
Chrissie
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2003
Marylin,
Such beauty and discovery
of embrace this
holds
"We rode currents for miles - just
me in your world where there is no
Peg
hurry and time doesn’t exist. "
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2003
" a dream that came true" how beautiful is that...wonderful Marilyn..I love the dolphin too..Floria
Reviewed by David Leigh (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2003
The pleasure of interaction between worlds.
Nice write.
This is so sweet work....loved this....thanks for sharing...love n luck...BHUWAN
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2003
Very nice.
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2003
its a dolphin!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL okay i htink this is a beautiful romantic poem the reason i say its a dolphin is thats what i see carryingyou through the sea or perhaps youre the dolphin either way this was an excelent testimony of romance and sentimental beauty great job on this one
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Chrissie
Such beauty and discovery
of embrace this
holds
"We rode currents for miles - just
me in your world where there is no
Peg
hurry and time doesn’t exist. "
Nice write.