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Whispering Eyes
by Marilyn Seray → (All Poetry by Marilyn Seray)
  
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To my AD family-


Thanks for reading, reviewing my work and for being the wonderful poets that you are.

I wish you all peace, love and health in 2004


HAPPY NEW YEAR!


Love,
Marilyn



~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

The last dance...



I pull you tighter to me as we sway to

the music.


My hands are around the back of your

neck caressing the softness of your hair


Your hands slide up my nape --

and tenderly comb my hair with your

fingertips


The music stops and we get closer to

find comfort in each other from the

silence…


Oh yes…


My head falls back and I see the soft

flames in your eyes demanding an

answer from mine


They whisper back the sweet memories

we’ve made this year


Mm…


Memories…


Memories of love and passion that you’ve

ignited in me from a mere flame and have

kept smoldering


The sparks in your eyes silences mine

and whispers that your eternal flame

will never burn out because the end

will always be the beginning...


when our eyes whisper through

another year.




© copyright MS 12-31-03




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 Reviews of "Whispering Eyes"
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 19, 2004
This is perfection, so sweetly romantic, intensely passionate.

Reviewed on January 5, 2004
This was so lovely, just beautiful to read this evening,

Reindeer

Reviewed on January 4, 2004
Wonderful sentiments, Marilyn! So beautifully-wpoken words, I truly enjoyed this.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2004
What a lovely read, pure pleasure, well done...Mark...

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on January 3, 2004
A gorgeous piece Marilyn. It's always lovely to read one from you.
Happy New Year to you and yours
~Chrissie

Reviewed on January 2, 2004
very lovely write, marilyn; so glad to see you here! hope all is well; wishing you nothing but the BEST this year! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in the lone star state, karen lynn in texas. :D

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on January 2, 2004
Very Very beautiful write...have a great new year....love n luck...BHUWAN

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on January 1, 2004
First of all Happy New Year to you & your family Marilyn.

I agree with Eileen it's always great to see you. Great choice of music.

I love how you wrote this.....each line a little tease into the next....just gorgeous.

I might leave this page open so I can hear the sound still ;)
Ty and very best wishes, Dani

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on January 1, 2004
Very beautiful. Happy New Year!

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 1, 2004
a beautiful write.... marilyn

Happy New Year
William

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 1, 2004
A jewel of a loving write. Thank you Marilyn. All the best to you. Love and peace, Regis.

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
Reviewed on January 1, 2004
beautiful.

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on January 1, 2004
Marilyn...How you seem to exude romance in every thing you do is always magical and warming...Happy New Year to you and yours and in hopes that this is an even better year for all you do.
Amor

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on January 1, 2004
Gorgeous writing Marilyn....thanks for always reading me and replying
Wishing you a wonderful new year.....blessings to you...floria

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on January 1, 2004
You have a Happy New Year too!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 1, 2004
romantic gem ...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 31, 2003
Wonderful write. Happy New Years!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 31, 2003
Lovely Write Marilyn!!

Warm love...and a Happy New Year Girlfriend!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 31, 2003
Yer all women seem to love the nape thingy, not seen you on for ages..

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 31, 2003
Marilyn so good to see you! You are sorely missed ! thanks for sharing this lovely poem, and the music even if it does always make me tear;-)..The best of New Years to you and yours!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 31, 2003
How lovely Marilyn...
Thank you for being here too.
Have a Wonderful, Prosperous, New Year!


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