Seeing Her (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

wonderful.

about the form: check out c.k. williams

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

Lori, there are three songs now posted. You need to click on a song to play it. Hugs Bill

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

Awesome lines
I like this one....I see love�s potential fulfilled in ways that only dreamers view through the colored lens of a dream
Have a great night Lori......

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

Excellent write...this verse here drives the whole essence of the poem home for me...well done.
Allen

"Seeing her, I see a fearful reflection of myself, and at times, I�m not sure I like what I see "

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

The format is fine Lori...the words tell
the emotions here...and thats all that
counts...very powerful writing again from
you...so many emotions in here..
you are a very strong woman...love...floria

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

Rather Romantic!

TRASK

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

EXCELLENT slice of life ..Prose poetry!

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

Well done Lori.

Thanks for sharing apart of yourself

Joy and sunshine

HH

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

You tell it like it is. Great write!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

I see nothing wrong with the format..and the message although tart is quite clear. Good write Lori. Lisa

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

A beautiful bittersweet write. Excellent.

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

sounds good to me and expressed very well. Kind of reminded me of Martha Stewart in some ways. Good job. love and peace G

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

This is bittersweet beauty, Lori - like the author herself. I'm a new kid on the block here, and new to writing, but if your friends below speak truly about you - and I'm sure they do, I can't help but agree with everything they say. But you can't BE the mirror which reflects gorgeous light and stare into it to see for yourself who you are at the same time! Just believe what others are saying THEY see and some day that truth will take hold in your own heart and move that vital six inches from hearing it in your head to being a living reality in your inner being. Journey on, Lori - we're all travelling with you... KB

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

SPlendid poetry Lori!!

Ditto...I agree with Eileen on this one!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

Will you ever accept that you are all important? I hope so because when you finally do, you will see what really is, and not what just appears to be real.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

i really like the format to this superb poem ...

Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra (Reader)

Reviewed on March 10, 2004

I agree with Eileen! Well written.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 10, 2004

Lori I very much like what I see! A well rounded person with strength of character, beauty of thought, and the will to go on through all adversity...A woman who doesn't realize that she has become all of these wonderful things...She needs to take another look and leave the old look behind...Outstanding write!;-)

Reviewed by Alain Gracio

Reviewed on March 10, 2004

I like the style and element of this poem. I love the romantic and gothic aspect of this very much.
Cheers
Alain