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The Cost
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A simple rose came my way
Sent by a fool called love
Kind hearted and pure, yet simply naïve
but strangely somehow from above

An unknown emotion came my way
dancing like a leaf on the walk
Turning and twisting and bouncing each way
Uncontrolled and unwilling to talk

A chance for forever came my way
With virtues above those I had known
Yet my heart was set on winning the bet
There was never a heavenly home

A final curtain came my way
Calling for what I had lost
Alone standing there
It seemed so unfair

I had nothing to cover the cost

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 Reviews of "The Cost"
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
You are so much more than you can see Lori. Why is it we can always see the greatnesss and goodness in others, but are blind to our own sweetness and light. If you could become what I feel and see in you, your life would change and you would realize what a trmendous person you are. Bill Murray

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
Very beautiful, Lori, and very sad as well.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
Captivating write, Lori. Emotionally moving and meaningful. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
FANTABULOUS writing, Lori!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 16, 2004
there'a always your soul ...

solid poem!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2004
I like it!{ouch}

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2004
You really make me think when I read your words...
Your a lovely soul writer.....
Have a great night!
x0x0x

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on March 16, 2004
The last line says it all.
'I had nothing to cover the cost'
Excellent!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on March 16, 2004
Your perceptivity is rivetting, Lori, and so awe-inspiring - saying so much with so few words. A deeply thought-provoking and quite shocking write, I found. Thank you. KB

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 16, 2004
Very touching poetry Lori!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sandra Corona
Reviewed on March 16, 2004
Fantastic write.
:)Sandy

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 16, 2004
Another deeply moving poem from the depths of your
gifted pen...I see such growth in you Lori!Kudo's!

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 16, 2004
Very nicely done

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2004
Just amazing writing.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2004
Oh Lori...how you touch me with
your writing...it is so deep...
so emotional...loved every line of
this...that last line is a bomb...
floria

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on March 16, 2004
Touching poetry Lori. Lisa

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2004
Very insightful write!

Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2004
Beautiful write!


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