A simple rose came my way
Sent by a fool called love
Kind hearted and pure, yet simply naïve
but strangely somehow from above
An unknown emotion came my way
dancing like a leaf on the walk
Turning and twisting and bouncing each way
Uncontrolled and unwilling to talk
A chance for forever came my way
With virtues above those I had known
Yet my heart was set on winning the bet
There was never a heavenly home
A final curtain came my way
Calling for what I had lost
Alone standing there
It seemed so unfair
I had nothing to cover the cost
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Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
You are so much more than you can see Lori. Why is it we can always see the greatnesss and goodness in others, but are blind to our own sweetness and light. If you could become what I feel and see in you, your life would change and you would realize what a trmendous person you are. Bill Murray
Your perceptivity is rivetting, Lori, and so awe-inspiring - saying so much with so few words. A deeply thought-provoking and quite shocking write, I found. Thank you. KB
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Contraband Marriage, traveling along the hemline of loving after incarceration, is a love story written in lyric and free form, set in reality with a different ever after.
solid poem!
Your a lovely soul writer.....
Have a great night!
x0x0x
'I had nothing to cover the cost'
Excellent!
Love Tinka
:)Sandy
gifted pen...I see such growth in you Lori!Kudo's!
your writing...it is so deep...
so emotional...loved every line of
this...that last line is a bomb...
floria